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7/23/21, 11:21 PM
absolutely amazing. Most exciting story on this site in a long time! The editing of this straight guy is brilliant.
7/23/21, 10:00 PM
So awesome. I love stories
7/23/21, 2:28 PM
Wow. This was a brilliant ending! It certainly tied up all the loose ends (is the Company expanding? Why haven't the cops gotten involved?), but there's also that Hypnothrill-patented brand of terror, and even a bit of sadness. The fact that a few seconds without the conditioning is enough to bring Leo back to a semblance of his old self is a reminder of just how scary this story is: ALL of these men went through this. Plus the contrast between the sex scenes and hyper-emotional attachment and the fact that the "real" Leo doesn't even KNOW Sebastian is a genius choice, as is Leo's small, frightened voice as he begs to go home for the last time. As sweet as the "love" scenes may be, it's a stark reminder that it ISN'T love: it's brainwashing and random pairing to keep men slaves. Well done, Hypnothrill. Well done.

7/23/21, 9:39 PM
@Feed Your Head Thanks for your perceptive reading of the story! Although I was happy to see that so many people are liking this conclusion, I was a bit surprised to see so many comments calling it "sweet," because I thought it was extremely dark! Yes, it's romantic (especially with the imagery of Sebastian carrying Leo over the threshold like a newlywed) but then the whole romantic coupling (or "buddy system") is a way that the company ensures the employees reinforce each other's brainwashing. And I did want to show the scary side of that--hence, Leo, who seems so confident throughout the story, is suddenly confused and child-like, being led by the hand by his "buddy."
7/23/21, 9:22 PM
this is a hot story, It should have continued.
7/23/21, 8:22 PM
great job developing the character and setting!
Anonymous
7/23/21, 8:21 PM
Everything about this chapter is unbelievably hot. Very excited to see what the most recent changes are. Keep up the great work!
Jan 22, 2007
7/23/21, 8:07 PM
One of the best stories on here :) Hope for more someday!
7/23/21, 6:51 PM
So hot. Hope more is on the way.
7/23/21, 6:39 PM
well, let see how things change by tomorrow