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7/23/21, 12:40 PM
*author releases third chapter after all the positive feedback and all the encouragement despite not having any intention to make more than 2 chapters and not originally having any plan for how the story would continue.* *readers go off and write essays criticising his throw away fictional porn for not being woke and pc enough, that this 10 minute stroke and choke is not showing enough ethical responsibility about issues he would've never even though about when he was concentrating on what makes him horny and what he thinks people will like.* "Hey. How come DoubleCream never posts? The authors I always like go away. There's never anything good being posted." My friends, I give you the people on the Internet.

7/23/21, 11:21 PM
@James Heller Great reply. DoubleCream wrote a great third chapter.

7/23/21, 11:44 PM
@JuniorNeedsaButtSpanking Agreed!!
7/23/21, 11:21 PM
absolutely amazing. Most exciting story on this site in a long time! The editing of this straight guy is brilliant.
7/23/21, 10:00 PM
So awesome. I love stories
7/23/21, 2:28 PM
Wow. This was a brilliant ending! It certainly tied up all the loose ends (is the Company expanding? Why haven't the cops gotten involved?), but there's also that Hypnothrill-patented brand of terror, and even a bit of sadness. The fact that a few seconds without the conditioning is enough to bring Leo back to a semblance of his old self is a reminder of just how scary this story is: ALL of these men went through this. Plus the contrast between the sex scenes and hyper-emotional attachment and the fact that the "real" Leo doesn't even KNOW Sebastian is a genius choice, as is Leo's small, frightened voice as he begs to go home for the last time. As sweet as the "love" scenes may be, it's a stark reminder that it ISN'T love: it's brainwashing and random pairing to keep men slaves. Well done, Hypnothrill. Well done.

7/23/21, 9:39 PM
@Feed Your Head Thanks for your perceptive reading of the story! Although I was happy to see that so many people are liking this conclusion, I was a bit surprised to see so many comments calling it "sweet," because I thought it was extremely dark! Yes, it's romantic (especially with the imagery of Sebastian carrying Leo over the threshold like a newlywed) but then the whole romantic coupling (or "buddy system") is a way that the company ensures the employees reinforce each other's brainwashing. And I did want to show the scary side of that--hence, Leo, who seems so confident throughout the story, is suddenly confused and child-like, being led by the hand by his "buddy."
7/23/21, 9:22 PM
this is a hot story, It should have continued.
7/23/21, 8:22 PM
great job developing the character and setting!
Anonymous
7/23/21, 8:21 PM
Everything about this chapter is unbelievably hot. Very excited to see what the most recent changes are. Keep up the great work!
Jan 22, 2007
7/23/21, 8:07 PM
One of the best stories on here :) Hope for more someday!
7/23/21, 6:51 PM
So hot. Hope more is on the way.