Recent Comments

7/22/21, 7:20 PM
GREAT initial effort!
7/22/21, 6:33 PM
I'm glad to hear he will be able to mod some guys now, I hope.
7/22/21, 6:31 PM
will we see a part 2 eventually?
Doug
7/22/21, 4:57 PM
brilliant

7/22/21, 6:17 PM
@Doug Thanks so much!
Anonymous
7/22/21, 1:48 PM
How about a minor league baseball team, or a college fraternity?

7/22/21, 1:59 PM
@ agreed

7/22/21, 4:05 PM
Thanks for the suggestions anonymous and @darkblade2814! I do plan for a sports based chapter, but I hadn't considered baseball yet. Cheers!
7/22/21, 12:16 PM
This chapter is even hotter than the first! Loving this series.

7/22/21, 3:58 PM
Great to hear, @Hypnoguy67! I hope you'll like what's coming next.
7/22/21, 3:55 PM
There are not enough incest stories, so thank you very much for this hot story.
7/22/21, 9:27 AM
This is so great! I especially loved the epilogue with the "side business."

7/22/21, 3:49 PM
Thanks @Hypnothrill, I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll admit the epilogue was a last minute addition, but the idea jumped out at me.
7/21/21, 11:08 PM
That was nice, will this story be the start of a new series about the ring?

7/22/21, 1:37 AM
@darkblade2814 Oh no this is the start of the story about the ring. The title says it all.

7/22/21, 6:50 AM
@Drake Nightstorm I see, I asked because it was framed (to me at least) like the start of a new batch of stories

7/22/21, 12:47 PM
@darkblade2814 I get that, but something about this series that I thought about but don't have a good way of figuring out how to make this clear. The whole series isn't in order. In other words you are looking at events in the rings life out of sequence.

7/22/21, 1:31 PM
@Drake Nightstorm I can see that, still, that was a good origin story

7/22/21, 3:24 PM
@darkblade2814 I think you might be happy to know, that I have a few ideas for other stories in this series. Not sure when they will get written but the ideas are floating out there just like the ring is out there.

7/22/21, 3:35 PM
@Drake Nightstorm that is good to know
7/22/21, 1:48 PM
In a semi unrelated matter, you are one of the few writer here who doesn't have anything bad here, even the things I don't like are very good, thank you

7/22/21, 3:20 PM
@darkblade2814 Thank you!