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7/22/21, 7:21 AM
really fun and hot!! but some parts were confusing with who said what, as if they said something, but were actually just reacting. had to look over a couple but other than that amazin
7/22/21, 6:11 AM
I can't wait for part five, for the Hypnothrill sexy twist that makes me save and come back time and time again.
Uniformboy
7/22/21, 2:49 AM
Thank you for this, so hot! please write more like this!
Anonymous
7/22/21, 2:37 AM
Very hot and sexy. I hope to see more like this
7/22/21, 12:46 AM
This was my favorite chapter so far! The images are fantastic: guys with their cocks out are nice, but guys staring blank-eyed and slackjawed at a screen being hypnotized are BETTER. ;p I also love the seeming-throwaway line of "Glad you're on our side"--it suggests that, after someone successfully got away, the brainwashing was immediately updated so that strong-willed individuals would turn that will toward praising the company. Spooky! What will happen next...
7/21/21, 11:18 PM
Slow burn with splendid denoument. Get outside my head, sistah! My inner skinpig stupidly grunts in appreciation.
5/9/21, 2:20 PM
A buff, manly, jock like Mike surely stops at the juice bar twice a day for his protein shakes. Just doing a bit of math… - average guy’s “load size” is 1 teaspoon, there are 48 teaspoons in a cup - Mike drinks a 2 cup (16oz shake) each day - 2000 men on the cruise, each dropping one load weekly in the juice bar “Fill Mike’s bro-tein” bucket - 2K ppl / 48 teaspoon = 41cups a week / 2 (drinks a 2 cup size) = 20 shakes a week - Mike’s 2 daily 32oz drinks x 7days = 224oz or almost 2 gallons (1.75) a week…if he works the cruise 2 weeks that’s a thirst-quenching 3.5 gallons he’ll have ingested. Keeping full-time clear and easy access to his puckered hole, Mike’s uniform of just his jockstrap didn’t stop him from complaining to the juice bar that his ‘regular’ protein shake tasked funny, demanding the employee give him a bigger banana for his shake. The employee picked the largest banana he could find, Mike with his hands full holding his tray piled with his breakfast and shake yelled “just how can I carry that?” The resourceful employee moved behind Mike and forced the dry, oversized fruit, completely up Mikes ass as he let out a whimper and walked away.

5/14/21, 4:26 AM
@jkstrapme hahaha love the math

Anonymous
7/21/21, 10:47 PM
@Nebulae hope all is well hope you've not given up on Mikes punishment. looking forward to the next chapter, soon? :)
7/21/21, 10:05 PM
can't wait for the conclusion of this story hypnothrill. I have really enjoyed this
Anonymous
7/21/21, 9:52 PM
Phenomenal
7/21/21, 9:45 PM
Definitely have to agree with Hypnothrill; good start but take some time to make the differences clearer. Especially as you put Noah in a different class by being taken over by the Master itself, the reader should know how Noah is different from all the other soldiers in the Hive mind. But please keep writing these types of story.