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7/21/21, 4:18 AM
This was super hot and sexy. Love how he dived for the cum in the ass at the end. Also the way the priest 'resisted' at first was cool but even he couldn't fight the urges. Urges which were made to be completely 'natural' and normal and stuff, I liked that. So yeah this was super hot and sexy. Oh, on the end, I like how matter of fact this is. Like "well, if 100 is what I have to get to then 100 is what I will have to do' and no hangups about that. hehe
Apr 6, 2021
rwriter51
7/21/21, 4:09 AM
I think what actually has happened is our erstwhile hero was really the hypnotized victim and he only believes his reality is the truth. Details aren't clear to him and so they're not relayed to us readers. It will all become clear when he comes out of trance on his knees in the boys' lavatory with a dick in each end, a cum soaked face, and students taking video of his humiliation. And a good laugh was had by all.
7/21/21, 3:57 AM
Such incredible world-building and an intriguing story! I look forward to more chapters.

7/21/21, 3:59 AM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you so much for your encouraging words! We're already editing the next few, so more is definitely coming!
Anonymous
7/21/21, 2:39 AM
Wow, you're off to a great start! Looking forward to seeing what you have in store for the rest of the story.
7/20/21, 3:54 AM
An absolutely amazing story; you're able create a world and a set of characters that we want to see grow and expand their horizons and ours and we read about them Please continue working on this world.

MuscleCub
7/20/21, 4:56 PM
Thanks so much @New Guy in Town Very much appreciated! Took a quick glance at your profile (I should update mine) and the fact that what I write isn't quite "up your alley" yet have such positive feedback really makes the effort worthwhile and motivates me to keep writing. Thanks again!

7/21/21, 2:00 AM
@MuscleCub Your story appeals to the D&D player in me; actually have a lawful good knight vampire who is a party with a couple of werebears, so your characters were touching upon that. I'm looking forward to the next adventures.
7/21/21, 1:54 AM
The dad had to join in, or maybe the Dad have this curse before.
7/21/21, 12:03 AM
Oh my LORD, where to begin... this was amazing. The world-building, the atmosphere, the sensuality, the dreamlike quality, it was all truly something else. And just when I was wishing you'd include more physical sensations to amp up Eamon's experience of what was going on, you *did*, and you delivered some really hot sex scenes. If I had any quibbles, it would be around characterization and some word choice. Eamon was a bit of a blank slate - not much personality came through the narrative. Which could well have been the point given what was happening to him, so perhaps that's just my personal taste. As well, there were two or three times where a word or some phrasing stuck out to me as not quite fitting the vaguely Victorian feel you had going on, like describing the Wellhouse lock as busted. This is easily one of the most imaginative and well-written stories on the site. Well done!

7/21/21, 12:34 AM
@Noam de Pluma Thank you *so* much! Hearing you say that is so encouraging and keeps words flowing. I also really appreciate the detailed feedback -- it helps to know what's coming through and how in the writing. I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
7/21/21, 12:01 AM
Very interesting - definitely looking forward to reading more!
IvorySilk
7/20/21, 11:34 PM
Hehe, it's starting! Looking forward to more! ^^

7/20/21, 11:42 PM
@IvorySilk thanks for reading it and encouraging me to keep at it! <3
7/20/21, 11:20 PM
What a fun and whimsical story. I loved it.