Recent Comments

7/20/21, 8:53 PM
Hottt. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Anonymous
7/20/21, 8:38 PM
I wonder if the father will be joining in the fun
Anonymous
7/20/21, 7:57 PM
Awww, poor Leo seems lonely; hopefully he won't have to wait too long before he gets a buddy of his own!
Nutiper
7/20/21, 7:38 PM
*Whew!* That was hot, and also this is a *fun* premise. I do have a soft spot for Chronivac-style stories, and I loved the set-up where both guys seem convinced that the other guy has no idea about the app, as they both take turns back-and-forth with changing each other. I liked how we could also see oblivious inconsistencies in both guys' attitudes, hinting at the way that the other guy has changed them in the past... Like Brad's hyper-sensitive nipples, or Collin's unthinking need to wear the appropriate "uniform" for whatever he's doing, plus hints that he used to be a top, and plenty of other stuff too. I think the concept of going in reverse, and having each chapter progress backward in time from the current scenario, is great. I'm excited to see what the next chapters look like!
7/20/21, 4:24 PM
Please continue. Maybe another young guy finds the cards and uses them on his bully? Might make his bully into his daddy or his new boy and he becomes the daddy.
7/20/21, 4:07 PM
Oof, perma-cursed? Poor guys. This was very well-written though. Well done.
7/20/21, 3:43 PM
I would love to know what Sean's dad is doing to Sean.
Anonymous
7/20/21, 3:01 PM
Super hot! I love this series.
7/20/21, 1:31 PM
This story is really sweet and sexy so far -- both of these guys seem really into it and I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops. The way you describe the mental changes is really nice and makes it seem natural to them. I hope you decide to continue!
Aug 15, 2010
Slave Darius
7/20/21, 12:53 PM
Amazing story. Please continue it, with Karnak being a willing slave and maybe recruiting others?