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7/20/21, 3:43 PM
I would love to know what Sean's dad is doing to Sean.
Anonymous
7/20/21, 3:01 PM
Super hot! I love this series.
7/20/21, 1:31 PM
This story is really sweet and sexy so far -- both of these guys seem really into it and I'm looking forward to seeing how it develops. The way you describe the mental changes is really nice and makes it seem natural to them. I hope you decide to continue!
Aug 15, 2010
Slave Darius
7/20/21, 12:53 PM
Amazing story. Please continue it, with Karnak being a willing slave and maybe recruiting others?
ForgottenCradle
7/20/21, 12:42 PM
OOOOOOG,that is an interesting premisse. And a great start,too job well done
7/20/21, 12:35 PM
Oh wow! This is amazingly hot. The writing is phenomenal, and the mental transformation, too!
7/20/21, 12:16 PM
Thanks for continuing this hot series. Would love to read more.
Anonymous
7/20/21, 10:37 AM
Went through and binged most of your works after you posted the first one last week. This definitely has to be one of my favourites!
7/18/21, 6:34 AM
I loved that arc on cyoc! Put in a chapter there too. Hope to see more like this as it's a fun premise.

7/19/21, 1:24 AM
Oh, sweet! I find CYOC is a great source for ideas even though lots of fun prompts fizzle out. @djinnie

7/20/21, 8:30 AM
@bluesuedewho Wait, your name sounded *extremely* familiar — I read and enjoyed this and a few of your other stories with no context, but I just went back to my old much-neglected cyoc account and saw you'd posted a bunch a few months ago in some threads I made, specifically the "a student meant to get a textbook and instead gets a book of reality one" ! That's wild, I love this story and I don't know if was those threads in particular which inspired it but either way, so glad you're writing more.

7/20/21, 10:12 AM
I hope it's cool that I used your idea as a springboard here (odds are pretty high we're talking about the same thread on CYOC)! I posted a few chapters there, but when nobody added anything to those threads for months I was inspired to try writing a whole story on GSS. I don't suppose you go by himitsuboy on CYOC? I haven't ever really written fiction before -- it was the madcap atmosphere of CYOC that helped me finally loosen up enough to get started. @cinaedus
7/20/21, 6:13 AM
Great work, hope we get a second chapter!

7/20/21, 9:55 AM
Thanks! Next chapter coming soon! @Growing Geek