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Scotty
7/20/21, 2:55 AM
LOVE following this story, hope the next chapter is near! Can't wait to see the humiliation get worse and I love the conflict he's going through as his mind gets destroyed. I also hope his drug use gets worse and further permanently damages his mind. Might be hot to see him corrupt one of his innocent friends somehow. keep writing! you're great! looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

7/20/21, 4:24 AM
Hi, @Scotty! Thank you so much for your comments! The next chapter is still a little while away, I've written probably a third part of it or so, but I promise it will be juicy. Kyle corrupting someone, that's an idea... let me think about it. Thanks for your support, is great to see positive comments!
Hob
7/20/21, 1:55 AM
As long time fan of the franchise (as you may tell from my avatar), I have loved this and the last story you posted. I hope to see more!!

7/20/21, 3:22 AM
@Hob Hehe, don't worry~ I've got a few to post from my backlog, along with another one of this series I finished recently
7/19/21, 4:15 PM
Great story. Love how They all turned gay after putting on their new uniforms.

7/20/21, 1:05 AM
Cheers! It is a trope I love, so it's great to hear when others enjoy it too. @Redcoma100
7/19/21, 3:15 PM
Always up for a nice sweet, hypnotic, rimming tale! Great story. :)

7/20/21, 1:04 AM
Thank you! It's always fun to write about fit men learning just how enticing eating another man's hole can be. @Heru Kane
7/19/21, 12:26 PM
where is the rest of this story? I've read this before and i know it went farther then them getting on the bus!

7/19/21, 11:18 PM
@Kerwin I've started rewriting it into the multi chapter story it should have been in the first place. The original upload had a lot cut out (the first lines are actually the beginning of Chapter 3) and was horribly compressed (the first chapter is already longer than the original upload) to try and fit inside the guidelines of the challenge. The current status of the rewrite is Chapter 1: Complete and posted Chapter 2: Partially done (there are a few scenes that aren't cooperating) Chapter 3: Just needs 2 posted and a little polishing Then there is a mass of outline and a few scattered scenes roughly where they belong The last three chapters of the story are in basically the same state as 3 I haven't had a lot of time for writing this year and my muse has been focused on later parts of the story when I've had time to work on it so progress has been slow, but I am going to get this story posted if it kills me. It just might take a while.
ForgottenCradle
7/19/21, 5:47 PM
another great chapter. really liked the little bit of lore in there. good thing Roddy and JP are buddies now after their falling out. I wonder how far up the food chain this buddy system goes,though? Did the big boss implement it? Or does it come from an outside source and boss got buddied up,as well?

7/19/21, 6:24 PM
@ForgottenCradle I guess this says something about how I view corporations and late capitalism, but when I was writing this story, I didn't imagine any "big boss." It's just the impersonal, nameless "Company" that's warping all these men's minds in a way that makes them more productive, loyal employees. If I was interested in uncovering the mystery of who's behind all of this--which I'm not--maybe I'd reveal that the Company was actually being run by an AI programmed to maximize employee productivity that had analyzed tons of data, then taken matters into its own hands, brainwashing the employees in order to meet its programmed objectives.

7/19/21, 11:05 PM
@Hypnothrill i love this, since really what is the boss himself except for "capital personified and endowed with a consciousness and will"?
7/19/21, 10:39 PM
I'm a simple man, I see big sub small top in a hypno gay story, I'm in. Also, feet, thanks for that, the more the merrier <3
7/19/21, 8:43 PM
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7/19/21, 7:40 PM
Ah, HERE's the Hypnothrill social commentary I love: the disturbing deification of corporations and companies. So many big companies (cough cough Amazon Google cough) try to produce a friendly "buddy-buddy" image to the public...all while sucking the very life out of as many employees as possible. Here we see the logical conclusion: men hooked on orgasm (that most potent of drugs) and brainwashed to believe that the COMPANY loves them and knows everything. No one does it better than you, Hypnothrill! :)
7/18/21, 3:20 PM
The reality change stuff here is great. I hope things stay positive and fun. I do like the college is free element, nice touch. Also him getting a new phone as a sign of more saved money is great. Them remembering the old is good too. In fact I would totally add something like "[name] always remembers what things like were before a change even as he fully knows how things are now." But yeah, lots of fun here. PS. Hope some rimming occurs. :)

7/19/21, 1:28 AM
Thanks! Glad my little setting changes came through. I'm planning on working in your suggestion to the main characters' list of "safety clauses." No promises on when, but there will definitely be rimming at some point. @Heru Kane

7/19/21, 4:07 PM
@bluesuedewho awesome stuff. Looling forward to that. Oh, by the way, I could see him writimg something like "STDs were wiped out by science" and "Male butts are strenchy and can easily and safely take even the biggest cocks" and maybe even "male butts have a natural lube to make them clean". Hehe Lots of fun could be had here. Like I know I would give straight guy bubble butts and make it so gay guys naturally have bigger cocks. Hehe Anyway. Whether you like or use my ideas or npt, minus the rimming, yay on that, this is a good story!

7/19/21, 7:29 PM
We must be thinking alike! About half these things are already in my draft for chapter 2! @Heru Kane