Recent Comments

7/18/21, 6:34 AM
I loved that arc on cyoc! Put in a chapter there too. Hope to see more like this as it's a fun premise.

7/19/21, 1:24 AM
Oh, sweet! I find CYOC is a great source for ideas even though lots of fun prompts fizzle out. @djinnie

7/20/21, 8:30 AM
@bluesuedewho Wait, your name sounded *extremely* familiar — I read and enjoyed this and a few of your other stories with no context, but I just went back to my old much-neglected cyoc account and saw you'd posted a bunch a few months ago in some threads I made, specifically the "a student meant to get a textbook and instead gets a book of reality one" ! That's wild, I love this story and I don't know if was those threads in particular which inspired it but either way, so glad you're writing more.

7/20/21, 10:12 AM
I hope it's cool that I used your idea as a springboard here (odds are pretty high we're talking about the same thread on CYOC)! I posted a few chapters there, but when nobody added anything to those threads for months I was inspired to try writing a whole story on GSS. I don't suppose you go by himitsuboy on CYOC? I haven't ever really written fiction before -- it was the madcap atmosphere of CYOC that helped me finally loosen up enough to get started. @cinaedus
7/20/21, 6:13 AM
Great work, hope we get a second chapter!

7/20/21, 9:55 AM
Thanks! Next chapter coming soon! @Growing Geek
7/19/21, 7:45 PM
Finally a new series I can look forward to! I can see someone stealing the book, crossing out 'Sam is straight and nothing can turn him' and writing in 'Sam is gay and nothing can turn him straight'

7/20/21, 9:54 AM
Thanks! Gabe and Sam are both trying to be as careful as possible, but they're definitely going to run into some trouble soon. @DuskSkullKing
7/19/21, 12:46 PM
I'll enjoy reading more chapters for sure!

7/20/21, 9:53 AM
Thanks! The next chapter should be up in a couple of days. @JockPupTraxxx
7/20/21, 7:52 AM
The family that plays together stays together. Really enjoying this series.
7/20/21, 5:42 AM
very creative! would love to see what more items do
boi98229
7/20/21, 5:31 AM
As i am sure you intended, your narrative is so much like an induction and hypnotic manipulation that i felt like i was there experiencing the same. Looking forward to being talked into further submission and service when i wake up and find you've written the next hot chapter.
boi98229
7/20/21, 4:50 AM
As with all those making earlier comments, i thought this story was really hot. i wish my first experience with hypnosis had been exactly like this one!!
Scotty
7/20/21, 2:55 AM
LOVE following this story, hope the next chapter is near! Can't wait to see the humiliation get worse and I love the conflict he's going through as his mind gets destroyed. I also hope his drug use gets worse and further permanently damages his mind. Might be hot to see him corrupt one of his innocent friends somehow. keep writing! you're great! looking forward to the next chapter!!!!

7/20/21, 4:24 AM
Hi, @Scotty! Thank you so much for your comments! The next chapter is still a little while away, I've written probably a third part of it or so, but I promise it will be juicy. Kyle corrupting someone, that's an idea... let me think about it. Thanks for your support, is great to see positive comments!
Hob
7/20/21, 1:55 AM
As long time fan of the franchise (as you may tell from my avatar), I have loved this and the last story you posted. I hope to see more!!

7/20/21, 3:22 AM
@Hob Hehe, don't worry~ I've got a few to post from my backlog, along with another one of this series I finished recently