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7/18/21, 11:41 PM
Awesome story so far! Love the slow burn both physical and mental. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
3/3/19, 11:01 AM
NO ONE CALLS IT A MOBILE

U.K. guy
7/18/21, 10:20 PM
It's the usual term in Britain except when people are showing off their ownership of some specific swanky model of mobile phone.
IvorySilk
7/13/21, 8:11 PM
Great start! Looking forwards to seeing more! I'm especially curious about how this memory altering technology will factor into the story. :3

7/18/21, 9:29 PM
@IvorySilk πŸ’–
7/18/21, 3:21 AM
Excellent first chapter! I would love to read more.

7/18/21, 9:28 PM
@Hypnoguy67 thank you so much! I'm working on editing the second chapter and hope to post it in the upcoming week!
7/18/21, 10:40 AM
Great story, the only part I winced at was repeating the myth of Marsha throwing the first ANYTHING at Stonewall. She and Sylvia weren't even there the night that the police raided. They were extremely active in the Stonewall Rebellion in the following days, but they didn't catch word of what happened at Stonewall until the first night's events already ended. Stonewall charged a cover, so Marsha and Sylvia were at a drag bar several blocks away. Had this confirmed by a Stonewall vet who was INSIDE Stonewall when a drag king named Vinnie threw the first punch.

7/18/21, 1:23 PM
Thanks for the history tip. It prompted some deeper research -- I'm going to edit the story to make it more accurate. I found this excellent article on the complex oral history of Stonewall, and figured I should share it: https://www.them.us/story/who-threw-the-first-brick-at-stonewall

Anonymous
7/18/21, 6:44 PM
@bluesuedewho I'll also add that Sylvia's comment about the Molotov cocktails was most likely in jest: there were none of those thrown either, and probably no bricks either (the entire street at that time was cobblestone, and there were no construction sites nearby to grab bricks from).

7/18/21, 8:03 PM
@bluesuedewho That article you posted also has a couple of historical inaccuracies. Storme DeLarverie ALSO wasn't there on that first night. She was working as a bouncer in a lesbian bar in a different neighborhood, and couldn't get there until the following day. It was, according to Stonewall veteran Rusty Rose (confirmed to have been inside the Stonewall at the time), a drag king whom she only knew as "Vinnie" that threw the first punch inside the Stonewall Inn itself, which Rusty then followed up with her own right hook to a cop's jaw.

Nutiper
7/18/21, 8:51 PM
I feel like a savvy fix would just be to highlight (in the story) that it *is* a popular myth, rather than a historical detail. That would solve the problem of inadvertent misinformation (because the story will highlight that, oh, this is a common sentiment but isn't true), while also keeping the flow of the story as written, without disrupting too much. So Sam could have edited the sentence "It's a popular myth that Marsha P. Johnson threw the first dildo at Stonewall..." which still changes their reality, but in a way that acknowledges it's also a myth.
Oct 11, 2020
Thiago
7/18/21, 7:38 PM
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7/18/21, 5:11 PM
omgg I love it
7/18/21, 4:58 PM
Clearly the best entry for me...
slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
7/18/21, 4:40 PM
Wow! Great start to the story. A buddy system, cocks to encourage productivity, is a management technique more companies need to adopt! Can't wait to rerad how well it is working!
7/18/21, 3:35 PM
Yes! Very awesome. Love the threesome idea. Also I'm happy that Reinhardt wants to bottom. I love dom top hypnotist so that was fun. This was super fun and sexy.