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Anonymous
7/15/21, 7:34 PM
Ugh so hot again! You always have a knack for what gets me going. Based on the trajectory of the story, I feel like this may not happen, but I would love some more details about the orientation video "telling them all they need to know"
7/15/21, 3:15 PM
Very hot. Sort of reminds me of Ruffcub's "Digitized," like maybe the guy is stuck in some VR program. I'm a sucker for "trapped in a computer" scenarios. Nicely done, in any case. Can't wait for more... Cheers, LLOYD

7/15/21, 6:04 PM
@Lloyd311 This is slightly closer to what I envisioned, or a mix between it and the effect of Quantum Leap. Many œons ago, "Men of Odyssey" did a pr0n called "Technical Ecstasy." The premise was a guy goes in for VR sex and is placed in the scenario, which he's supposed to work out through the help of a teleprompter. Towards the end, he gets sort of locked in and can't get back (unless I'm mixing up my porn). That idea was a heavy influence in the premise here, but I strayed from it with respect to mechanism / backstory (which has yet to be addressed).

7/15/21, 6:10 PM
@Lloyd311 Oh! right. Just looked up @Ruffcub 's series and that was definitely an influence here, I loved that series 🤤. His forcing of acting out the scenario is definitely closer to what I'm using that in "Tehcnical Ecstasy" which was more consensual to act things out, but again the premise of my story and the mechanism is very different from his, which I have not yet explained in the two existing chapters.
Jul 12, 2021
7/15/21, 6:05 PM
I'm not really into clothing transformation stories. This one is written well, following the familiar formula of clothing transformation stories. The only varience is type of clothing, and the person who will ultimately use it. In this case the firehouse was a novel choice, and the fireman character was attractive. It is a nice change from the more common jockstrap/sportsgear story.
7/15/21, 2:42 PM
I enjoyed the first part but this one's a big improvement with more detail and better exploration of the situation the protagonist is in. The premise is really great too - as the anonymous commenter above says, Quantum Leap for hot gay sex!

7/15/21, 6:01 PM
@Ruffcub Thanks! I definitely tried to expand the detail and transformation, though as usual I need to do better in the mind control part. As I noted in my response above (after you posted this), I only briefly watched one episode of Quantum Leap, but looking at the plot of the show, this wouldn't be too far off from the effect, but it's not exactly the scenario I envisioned.
Anonymous
7/15/21, 1:13 PM
Very hot writing! I'm thinking it is like Quantum Leap with gay boys?

7/15/21, 6:00 PM
I only briefly watched one episode of Quantum Leap, and I refused to watch more because of the main actor who, in my opinion, destroyed Star Trek. I should probably get over that because I liked him in Murphy Brown. Anyway ... looking at the plot of the show, this wouldn't be too far off from the effect.
excitedplayground
7/15/21, 8:02 AM
very jere for the constant transformation

7/15/21, 5:58 PM
@excitedplayground Thanks.
Anonymous
7/15/21, 6:34 AM
nice plot, like the transformations.

7/15/21, 5:58 PM
Thanks, I hope this chapter was better at it!
7/15/21, 4:50 AM
hot! no idea whats happening yet but im here for the ride!

7/15/21, 5:58 PM
@ace_vage Thanks much. I'm glad it's not wholly obvious.
7/15/21, 4:53 PM
I love to see the progression. I hope they expand their operation all over. Hopefully we will see some family businesses joining in.

7/15/21, 5:37 PM
@Gay_Genes We'll definitely get some quick glimpses into how the company is expanding, but this is primarily Leo's story. I do still have a lot more images of suited men I didn't get to use, however, so the idea of the Company taking over a family business might be a pretty good premise for a sequel.
7/15/21, 5:12 PM
you are such a good writer