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7/15/21, 4:50 AM
hot! no idea whats happening yet but im here for the ride!

7/15/21, 5:58 PM
@ace_vage Thanks much. I'm glad it's not wholly obvious.
7/15/21, 4:53 PM
I love to see the progression. I hope they expand their operation all over. Hopefully we will see some family businesses joining in.

7/15/21, 5:37 PM
@Gay_Genes We'll definitely get some quick glimpses into how the company is expanding, but this is primarily Leo's story. I do still have a lot more images of suited men I didn't get to use, however, so the idea of the Company taking over a family business might be a pretty good premise for a sequel.
7/15/21, 5:12 PM
you are such a good writer
7/15/21, 2:53 PM
I think this is a great start. I'm not sure where it's going, but am intrigued by the possibilities. Looking forward to your next installment : ) Cheers, LLOYD

7/15/21, 4:45 PM
@Lloyd311 thanks!
Chips
7/15/21, 4:44 PM
Just love your stories and this one will be up there with all the rest
7/15/21, 4:41 PM
Rob is distinctly unlikeable. An abuser more than a master. If that's what you were going for, then that's fine but it didn't quite feel like that was the intent.
7/15/21, 4:12 PM
Good fun! Excited for more.
7/15/21, 3:35 PM
The jasper statuette being a Chekov's Gun is a brilliant touch. I'm looking forward to reading more about Instructor's and Rob's activities in the shower, and maybe seeing Instructor instruct some of the Agency members as well.

7/15/21, 3:40 PM
@Proteus I agree with that
7/15/21, 3:14 PM
What fun. I love how Leo's personality is slowly shifting from grouchy office worker to happy himbo! Who will be his buddy? Maybe Sebastian?
7/15/21, 3:06 PM
let see how Alan and the rest of the agency will change