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7/14/21, 3:34 AM
I hope you have Max mind control Aaron more!
7/14/21, 2:21 AM
love! just like pete's story
Mitchell Morris
7/14/21, 12:17 AM
Aces, man. Very clever. Like MC Escher's "Drawing Hands," but where it's not exactly pencils that the hands are holding... You've mentioned that "Derek Williams" himself is a pseudonym, correct? What happens when God realizes that He Himself is a fictional creation?

7/14/21, 1:41 AM
Thanks @Mitchell Morris - less pencils… more cocks. I didn’t say Derek is a pseudonym, but I believe Derek did at some point in the story. If hitchhikers guide is correct, at this point I should vanish in a puff of logic.
7/14/21, 1:39 AM
I read the story on Gaydemon. You didn't mention it was real.
7/14/21, 12:58 AM
I'm a sucker for cursed game show stories. This was a fun one! Nice job :)
Anonymous
7/14/21, 12:49 AM
Perfect <3
MuscleCub
7/14/21, 12:28 AM
Im absolutely thrilled, honoured, and humbled so many have enjoyed this story. Thank you all so very much! another chapter is going up shortly now that I'm back.
Art
7/14/21, 12:23 AM
Another fantastic story from mutabear! Would love to run into this daddy at the bar
7/14/21, 12:08 AM
Very interesting setting and concept, though a little unclear and ambiguous in the actual storytelling. I'd love to see the version of it you have in your head when you're not rushing to finish it for the challenge deadline!
7/9/21, 2:03 AM

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7/9/21, 3:03 PM
@ganymedesJockstrap I agree. It was also a sudden change from the loving and romantic Max, who earlier apologized for almost taking advantage of Lucas to a Max who forcefully cages Lucas so he would be dazed, docile and easy to control.

7/13/21, 11:28 PM
Yes I'm in this group as well. This was a very well-written and hot chapter,but as someone else said, it took a much darker turn than I expected. Max in this chapter seems like a different person; before he seemed like a pretty nice guy, but now he's suddenly much more dominant to the point I wonder if it's a physiological effect of having mated. Even so, he lied. He knows Lucas did not want the chastity cage, he negotiated with him, and then he did it anyway. If he had just suddenly caged Lucas "for his own good" and then insisted he try it a bit I wouldn't like it, but I wouldn't be quite as bothered. Instead he knows he lied, he even says he's sorry for lying - but of course he is not actually! - and that means Max has violated Lucas's consent. That's what is the problem is for me. I mean geeze he already has almost certainly knocked up Lucas, who has to deal with the horrible reality of his body now being even more not quite just his own, Max has to turn from powerful protector to exploitive dom? Guess he wasn't so lucky to be found by him after all. I hope Max gets pregnant instead. It would serve him right.