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7/14/21, 12:23 AM
Another fantastic story from mutabear! Would love to run into this daddy at the bar
7/14/21, 12:08 AM
Very interesting setting and concept, though a little unclear and ambiguous in the actual storytelling. I'd love to see the version of it you have in your head when you're not rushing to finish it for the challenge deadline!
7/9/21, 2:03 AM

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7/9/21, 3:03 PM
@ganymedesJockstrap I agree. It was also a sudden change from the loving and romantic Max, who earlier apologized for almost taking advantage of Lucas to a Max who forcefully cages Lucas so he would be dazed, docile and easy to control.

7/13/21, 11:28 PM
Yes I'm in this group as well. This was a very well-written and hot chapter,but as someone else said, it took a much darker turn than I expected. Max in this chapter seems like a different person; before he seemed like a pretty nice guy, but now he's suddenly much more dominant to the point I wonder if it's a physiological effect of having mated. Even so, he lied. He knows Lucas did not want the chastity cage, he negotiated with him, and then he did it anyway. If he had just suddenly caged Lucas "for his own good" and then insisted he try it a bit I wouldn't like it, but I wouldn't be quite as bothered. Instead he knows he lied, he even says he's sorry for lying - but of course he is not actually! - and that means Max has violated Lucas's consent. That's what is the problem is for me. I mean geeze he already has almost certainly knocked up Lucas, who has to deal with the horrible reality of his body now being even more not quite just his own, Max has to turn from powerful protector to exploitive dom? Guess he wasn't so lucky to be found by him after all. I hope Max gets pregnant instead. It would serve him right.
7/13/21, 11:16 PM
Pretty hot! I love dumb bros.
7/13/21, 2:25 AM
This was the hottest superhero downfall story I ever read. I wish there were more dog-play though. It's so hot to have a superhero as a pet.

7/13/21, 10:54 PM
@Superbelt Hi! Oh, man, thank you so much! Is great to read those comments. I'm not gonna make spoilers, but I think you're gonna like the next chapters *wink, wink *
7/13/21, 10:16 PM
Wonderful hot story with incredible transformations!
7/13/21, 9:50 PM
Terrific transformation sequence! Well done!
7/13/21, 9:46 PM
Awesome story also the link at the start helped to follow the story .Love that type of stories .Hope you win whoever you are . P.S the document has a typo at the last paragraph says Sam instead of Grant
Jul 12, 2021
lakritz24
7/13/21, 9:20 PM
Up right! My father was a firefighter and he wanted always i will join too. Somthing there was agains that, but after his dead i request it an d find an outher way to think, fell and recept. love this story very mutch. Kongrats to you, form make me and my fathers soul kompare. mfg Jo. Jo. Ze.
7/13/21, 8:58 PM
Another hot one from Hypnothrill! Love these mass assimilation plots where one walks into a group of obliviously converted guys carrying on life as usual in their parallel universe. I look forward to Leo gradually discovering more and more of the "new normal" in his office and ultimately finding out his "buddy".