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7/13/21, 1:36 PM
This was a fun story surprisingly I was able to follow along with the rules without thinking about it too much. I love these Jumanji type stories and seeing people change. Though I kinda wanted Trent to remember all this and make Grant his boyfriend. Oh well I love this story and hope you write another one soon.
7/13/21, 12:40 PM
just reading the words "good little boy" triggers regression and submission
7/13/21, 12:13 PM
Very hot! A really great story. Please continue!
7/13/21, 12:12 PM
Me too
7/13/21, 5:39 AM
Fascinating read. Well enjoyed it in an ASMR kinda way - mentally tickled, but became so absorbed by the mystery it didn't tickle the pickle. Not that the sex scenes aren't well written, they are, but I think you conveyed his confusion too well for me not to go on the head trip with him. Oh, and bravo for the protagonist being clearly non-white without resorting to stereotypes or it even being a plot issue.

7/13/21, 11:39 AM
Thanks for the feedback, @scudder. I was very tempted just to not describe Casper's skin tone at all and just let it be whatever the reader imagined, but really wanted to put that diversity out there. I'm glad it worked for you!
7/13/21, 10:31 AM
your stories have a way of making others discover more about there world and what needs to change awesome
Anonymous
7/13/21, 10:16 AM
hot daddy
Anonymous
7/13/21, 9:45 AM
great work thanks
Anonymous
7/13/21, 9:24 AM
oh man! such a hot start! Maybe we find out what happens when you don't have a buddy
7/13/21, 7:28 AM
Now this IS interesting. Ordinarily in your stories (and especially the longform ones!), dear Hypnothrill, the protagonist takes a much longer time to fall under the brainwashing. Seeing Leo immediately be conditioned by the muzak is a fun twist! It also makes me wonder just how depraved he'll get, if he's already conditioned enough to accept full-on sex happening in front of him. I wonder what will happen...

7/13/21, 7:34 AM
@Feed Your Head Just you wait! This story all takes place in a single day, but it's got a ton of fun twists.