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7/13/21, 7:19 AM
Straight up my alley, can't wait for the next parts!
Jul 12, 2021
7/13/21, 6:12 AM
I want to praise this story for its extremely strong visuals. However, as Lohengrin suggested, it would fit better on GSS if you placed a stronger emphasis on the narrator's mental transformation. His shift from being panicked to being pleased comes very quickly, and there's no sense of mental resistance, which for me would have made it hotter, especially if the transformed narrator spoke in a very different kind of voice at the end (one that sounds dumber or like an emotionless drone).
Daniel
7/13/21, 5:33 AM
the rape ( uhhh conversion ) was so hot dude I.J.S.
Daniel
7/13/21, 5:15 AM
more men...more corruption please dude .I.J.S.
Daniel
7/13/21, 4:59 AM
same I.J.S.
Daniel
7/13/21, 4:53 AM
more please, I love corruption, the 'taking' was hot dude ! I.J.S.
7/13/21, 4:32 AM
Now this is a real short story, well crafted, with the gay transformation parts very well done, and almost perfectly integrated into the story. I almost smell Conan Doyle as a co-author. Or make that Onan-Doyle. This could well be the beginning of a series of stories, using the the three named characters thus far. It would surely be a classic. Reminds me of Mr. Benson.
7/13/21, 4:05 AM
Hirsute, not histute. Then again, maybe you mean his tute. What's a tute, anyway? And why is his tute different from anyone else's tute? Inquiring minds want to know.
Jul 12, 2021
7/13/21, 3:17 AM
I would have preferred seeing his body turned into a bear or some such, rather than seeing him turned into protective clothing, no matter how butch the clothing might be. I mean, fetishes are all well and good, but this fetish is so specific to the author that it's meaning and implications are left unsaid, such that the erotic valence of the change--if any--is lost or unstated in the telling. From the literary or narrative point of view, there is no "money shot*. I wish there were such. An excellent build-up richly deserves a pay off.What is the erotic pay off, and what might it be?

jjjjjjjjj
7/13/21, 4:03 AM
@Lohengrin Thanks for your comment, and thank-you for taking the time to read my work. This story was my first foray into TF fiction. I originally published it on FurAffinity, but I recently discovered the community here on GSS, and I thought I might share some of my work here too. After spending some time on this site, I can see that the stuff I have done really does serve a bit of a niche. I have several other stories that I have written and published on FA, but they will likely need editing and changing (no pun intended) in order to fit the theme of the other stories I have read here. Some of the other stories I wrote involve the clothing being worn, which I suppose might serve as the "money shot" you mention? The climax of the TF, so to speak. Truth be told, there are some alterations I would have made to this story, even before I posted it here, that I thought about after writing a some other similar stories and learning from the process. Thank-you again for your feedback. This site is vast and full of content, so I appreciate the time you took to a) read my story, and b) post a comment. I will have a think about the other TF fiction I have written, and will consider what I can do to make it fit with what people come to GSS to read. Have a great week!
Conversion Enthusiast
7/13/21, 4:01 AM
I always come back to this. I'm not even a rubber enthusiast but you write with so much detail it's captivating. It definitely reawakening my young self desire for vampire conversion and was well integrated. Haha. Wish there was a sequel!