Recent Comments

blankbot
7/13/21, 12:06 AM
Outstanding writing--sensual and concise.
Anonymous
7/12/21, 3:26 PM
Isn't the guy aware of everything while this is happening even more rapey? I understand everyone's concern about it being rapey, but this is a mind control/hypnosis site for fantasies lol. Most of the stories I read do not have this type of "blank face" trance which I enjoy about Hypnosis. Maybe because they want to make the guy seem to "enjoy" it and be less rapey, even though it's a mind control fantasy site lol. So I just had to chime in that a big part of hypnosis/control for me is when the guy is mindless and follows every order with a blank face and I don't think I have seen much of that after Hyptrance stopped writing. So yes, less rapey stories are great and there are so many of them on the site. Love the feedback presented here and always chime in with feedback to better the story, but still keep the style the author wrote with if they like, in this case, a mindless trance lol. Sorry for the wall of text, but I feel I have to put in my two cents lol. The whole fantasy to to have blankface emotionless men and this story did it for me and I hope that people will continue writing more of this, if they choose to do so.

Anonymous
7/13/21, 12:03 AM
I couldn't agree more
7/12/21, 9:29 PM
I really wish I could be a boy in that world. Love the story!
7/12/21, 7:51 PM
Great ending! Love the domestic setup!
7/12/21, 5:54 PM
You had me at lampshading your own typo. This was so cute! Very *Six Characters In Search of an Author* energy. Fun, light, and very well executed.

7/12/21, 7:21 PM
Here's the weirdest part @Noam de Pluma: I went back and *added* the typo when the punchline just... appeared.
7/12/21, 3:09 PM
This was fantastic! Such a clever fun twist and a joy to read. Now how can i sign up for those notification tweets...

7/12/21, 7:20 PM
Hah, I had a feeling someone was gonna ask that @redwood! I don't have a Twitter for my author persona. I'm way too afraid I'll accidentally tweet the wrong thing on my main account.
7/12/21, 1:59 AM
Brilliant story! Meta, funny, and yet still hot!

7/12/21, 7:19 PM
Thanks @Max Lode! I'm super happy to see that the meta wasn't a huge turnoff for folks.
7/11/21, 11:01 PM
Loved this very creative, amusing story! I'm a big fan, Derek, and look forward to where your creativity leads you next. Thanks for writing.

7/12/21, 7:18 PM
Thank ye' @Hypnoguy67! I was feeling some writers block, hopefully getting a little weird clears that out.
7/12/21, 4:47 PM
Holy fuck this is a great story. Jesus Christ. You deserve to win the whole contest.

7/12/21, 7:15 PM
@Norismo Thank you so much! Glad you enjoyed :)
Anonymous
7/12/21, 6:35 PM
wonderful story. Would love to see what else mr Jabour is up to :)