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Daniel
7/13/21, 5:33 AM
the rape ( uhhh conversion ) was so hot dude I.J.S.
Daniel
7/13/21, 5:15 AM
more men...more corruption please dude .I.J.S.
Daniel
7/13/21, 4:59 AM
same I.J.S.
Daniel
7/13/21, 4:53 AM
more please, I love corruption, the 'taking' was hot dude ! I.J.S.
7/13/21, 4:32 AM
Now this is a real short story, well crafted, with the gay transformation parts very well done, and almost perfectly integrated into the story. I almost smell Conan Doyle as a co-author. Or make that Onan-Doyle. This could well be the beginning of a series of stories, using the the three named characters thus far. It would surely be a classic. Reminds me of Mr. Benson.
7/13/21, 4:05 AM
Hirsute, not histute. Then again, maybe you mean his tute. What's a tute, anyway? And why is his tute different from anyone else's tute? Inquiring minds want to know.
Jul 12, 2021
7/13/21, 3:17 AM
I would have preferred seeing his body turned into a bear or some such, rather than seeing him turned into protective clothing, no matter how butch the clothing might be. I mean, fetishes are all well and good, but this fetish is so specific to the author that it's meaning and implications are left unsaid, such that the erotic valence of the change--if any--is lost or unstated in the telling. From the literary or narrative point of view, there is no "money shot*. I wish there were such. An excellent build-up richly deserves a pay off.What is the erotic pay off, and what might it be?

jjjjjjjjj
7/13/21, 4:03 AM
@Lohengrin Thanks for your comment, and thank-you for taking the time to read my work. This story was my first foray into TF fiction. I originally published it on FurAffinity, but I recently discovered the community here on GSS, and I thought I might share some of my work here too. After spending some time on this site, I can see that the stuff I have done really does serve a bit of a niche. I have several other stories that I have written and published on FA, but they will likely need editing and changing (no pun intended) in order to fit the theme of the other stories I have read here. Some of the other stories I wrote involve the clothing being worn, which I suppose might serve as the "money shot" you mention? The climax of the TF, so to speak. Truth be told, there are some alterations I would have made to this story, even before I posted it here, that I thought about after writing a some other similar stories and learning from the process. Thank-you again for your feedback. This site is vast and full of content, so I appreciate the time you took to a) read my story, and b) post a comment. I will have a think about the other TF fiction I have written, and will consider what I can do to make it fit with what people come to GSS to read. Have a great week!
Conversion Enthusiast
7/13/21, 4:01 AM
I always come back to this. I'm not even a rubber enthusiast but you write with so much detail it's captivating. It definitely reawakening my young self desire for vampire conversion and was well integrated. Haha. Wish there was a sequel!
7/13/21, 3:42 AM
Good story, but the erotic parts could be more explicitly erotic. Don't tell, instead show. By the way, don't you mean Circe instead of Circa? The narrative is a great deal more meaningful with Circe. I wonder if your spell checker is out of control? You have to proofread these suckers before you post the story. The Circa-Circe business makes a great difference. Details are important!
JuniorNeedsaButtSpanking:
7/12/21, 7:58 AM
loved the 3rd chapter best. lucas didn't get hit, he got spanked. and he needed it. and his body wanted it. this was not abuse, he is with a man who he belongs too in a different world. whatever your abuse issues are in our world don't push them off on max who is primal and carnal in another world. i would love for the story to continu and for lucas to remain haunted and aware of what he once had in our world

7/12/21, 5:24 PM
@JuniorNeedsaButtSpanking: Agreed. I found it very sexual and intense. I loved how Lucas rebelled and got put in his place. I do hope he will keep a bit of that rebellious streak and not completely comply right away, also.

Big Matt
7/13/21, 2:14 AM
@JuniorNeedsaButtSpanking: Little Junior, you really do need a butt spanking. When men are sharing concerns, you be a good little boy and keep your mouth shut. That said, tiger's got a point. It's a hot chapter. And little boys like Lucas and Junior will always need men to put them over the knee and teach them their place.