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JuniorNeedsaButtSpanking:
7/12/21, 7:58 AM
loved the 3rd chapter best. lucas didn't get hit, he got spanked. and he needed it. and his body wanted it. this was not abuse, he is with a man who he belongs too in a different world. whatever your abuse issues are in our world don't push them off on max who is primal and carnal in another world. i would love for the story to continu and for lucas to remain haunted and aware of what he once had in our world

7/12/21, 5:24 PM
@JuniorNeedsaButtSpanking: Agreed. I found it very sexual and intense. I loved how Lucas rebelled and got put in his place. I do hope he will keep a bit of that rebellious streak and not completely comply right away, also.

Big Matt
7/13/21, 2:14 AM
@JuniorNeedsaButtSpanking: Little Junior, you really do need a butt spanking. When men are sharing concerns, you be a good little boy and keep your mouth shut. That said, tiger's got a point. It's a hot chapter. And little boys like Lucas and Junior will always need men to put them over the knee and teach them their place.
7/13/21, 1:49 AM
sweet story
blankbot
7/13/21, 12:06 AM
Outstanding writing--sensual and concise.
Anonymous
7/12/21, 3:26 PM
Isn't the guy aware of everything while this is happening even more rapey? I understand everyone's concern about it being rapey, but this is a mind control/hypnosis site for fantasies lol. Most of the stories I read do not have this type of "blank face" trance which I enjoy about Hypnosis. Maybe because they want to make the guy seem to "enjoy" it and be less rapey, even though it's a mind control fantasy site lol. So I just had to chime in that a big part of hypnosis/control for me is when the guy is mindless and follows every order with a blank face and I don't think I have seen much of that after Hyptrance stopped writing. So yes, less rapey stories are great and there are so many of them on the site. Love the feedback presented here and always chime in with feedback to better the story, but still keep the style the author wrote with if they like, in this case, a mindless trance lol. Sorry for the wall of text, but I feel I have to put in my two cents lol. The whole fantasy to to have blankface emotionless men and this story did it for me and I hope that people will continue writing more of this, if they choose to do so.

Anonymous
7/13/21, 12:03 AM
I couldn't agree more
7/12/21, 9:29 PM
I really wish I could be a boy in that world. Love the story!
7/12/21, 7:51 PM
Great ending! Love the domestic setup!
7/12/21, 5:54 PM
You had me at lampshading your own typo. This was so cute! Very *Six Characters In Search of an Author* energy. Fun, light, and very well executed.

7/12/21, 7:21 PM
Here's the weirdest part @Noam de Pluma: I went back and *added* the typo when the punchline just... appeared.
7/12/21, 3:09 PM
This was fantastic! Such a clever fun twist and a joy to read. Now how can i sign up for those notification tweets...

7/12/21, 7:20 PM
Hah, I had a feeling someone was gonna ask that @redwood! I don't have a Twitter for my author persona. I'm way too afraid I'll accidentally tweet the wrong thing on my main account.
7/12/21, 1:59 AM
Brilliant story! Meta, funny, and yet still hot!

7/12/21, 7:19 PM
Thanks @Max Lode! I'm super happy to see that the meta wasn't a huge turnoff for folks.
7/11/21, 11:01 PM
Loved this very creative, amusing story! I'm a big fan, Derek, and look forward to where your creativity leads you next. Thanks for writing.

7/12/21, 7:18 PM
Thank ye' @Hypnoguy67! I was feeling some writers block, hopefully getting a little weird clears that out.