Recent Comments

Kevin Rammage
7/12/21, 8:15 AM
Oh my god! This is easily the best story in this contest! The escalation was spot on, the stakes felt solidly high, it was fucking hot as hell! I very much want to see more stories in this series. You knocked this one out of the park!
Benny
7/12/21, 7:18 AM
Lots of potential for a sequel.
7/12/21, 2:55 AM
The scene with the kid brothers reprogrammed to lust for their big brother and masturbating on the countertop was incredibly hot!
Anonymous
7/12/21, 2:40 AM
Fantastic second part! I can't to see what happens next!
Kods
7/11/21, 11:58 PM
This is hot can't wait for more! Though I am curious how this will play out Jared and Matt seemingly had a deep connection even before Matt's powers came. but now they can express it intimately. I know you said it's going to be okay so I have hope! Though admittedly I'd still feel a bit sad if Matt's answer was "Yeah we can have sex and I'll dominate you...but I don't love you and never will."

7/12/21, 1:06 AM
@Kods Thanks a lot! Oh yeah, they're gonna have a happy ending but they're gonna have to earn it.
Anonymous
7/11/21, 11:07 PM
So you blackmailed your teacher?

7/11/21, 11:14 PM
yes @

Anonymous
7/11/21, 11:41 PM
@Davidc I am a teacher myself so needless to say this doesn't sit well with me at all. Granted I don't know the back story of why you blackmailed your teacher but I guess if that gets your rock off...

7/11/21, 11:54 PM
sorry you feel that way.

Anonymous
7/12/21, 1:01 AM
@Davidc I'm not. I do believe in karma though. ;)
Swizzington
7/12/21, 12:43 AM
Glad you enjoyed it! I don't think I have read any of Mr. Sloane's works, but I do enjoy horror (to an extent). I will give it a look! Thanks!
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7/12/21, 12:31 AM
I liked this a lot!
jjjjjjjjj
7/12/21, 12:28 AM
I liked the idea, but it scared me a little!
Anonymous
7/12/21, 12:22 AM
I love this!