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Anonymous
7/11/21, 11:07 PM
So you blackmailed your teacher?

7/11/21, 11:14 PM
yes @

Anonymous
7/11/21, 11:41 PM
@Davidc I am a teacher myself so needless to say this doesn't sit well with me at all. Granted I don't know the back story of why you blackmailed your teacher but I guess if that gets your rock off...

7/11/21, 11:54 PM
sorry you feel that way.

Anonymous
7/12/21, 1:01 AM
@Davidc I'm not. I do believe in karma though. ;)
Swizzington
7/12/21, 12:43 AM
Glad you enjoyed it! I don't think I have read any of Mr. Sloane's works, but I do enjoy horror (to an extent). I will give it a look! Thanks!
jjjjjjjjj
7/12/21, 12:31 AM
I liked this a lot!
jjjjjjjjj
7/12/21, 12:28 AM
I liked the idea, but it scared me a little!
Anonymous
7/12/21, 12:22 AM
I love this!
nobody
7/11/21, 7:33 PM
The whole story was great but.... where exactly did the points factor in??

7/12/21, 12:21 AM
It determined who won. The winner had the ability to alter all cards played any way he likes. However, due to the Reality Warp cars, neither Grant (the winner) nor any of the others realized the game was magic. From their perspective, they played a boring game where they drew cards that roughly mirrored themselves but otherwise did nothing. So Grant changed nothing. @nobody
7/11/21, 4:03 PM
This is one of my favorite reads in a while! I loved the transformation implied and the outcome at the end! I tend to be reticent to read stories coming out in one very long chapter, but the tags implied so many of my likes that I couldn't pass it! Amazing story!

7/12/21, 12:18 AM
If not for the challenge i would have probably broke it into 4 chapters. The intro and preliminary round for the 1st and a round per chapter there after. @Bigger
KKA
7/11/21, 7:53 PM
the Meta was super cute! cool seeing new things great work!

7/11/21, 10:58 PM
Thanks @KKA! I appreciate you giving something weird a shot. Sometimes it's fun :)
6/29/21, 12:38 PM
Super hot hookup! Excited to see where it goes. Mostly just feel bad for Jared, rejection's a bitch...

7/11/21, 8:25 PM
@tenser13 Thanks! don't worry, it's gonna be all right for him.
7/10/21, 1:37 PM
I love this story concept, but the end of this chapter feels sad :(

7/11/21, 8:25 PM
@RikuS Just wait, it all will be okay at the end.