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7/8/21, 7:27 AM
Hot story. How is is true, is it your experience, or you know the person it happened to?

7/10/21, 12:37 PM
@Jonanator hi, its a rue story that happened with me. it was a blackmail/ domination. i wrote the story the way it ahopened elsewhere and then i rhought what would happen if i turned it into a hypnosis story as i am intruiged by that. so i took out the blackmail and mist elements of domination/ the force side to get this.

7/10/21, 5:49 PM
well, it is a great story@Davidc

7/11/21, 1:57 AM
@Jonanator thanks for that. any feedback is much appreciated
7/11/21, 1:53 AM
Hot falls short. Excellent ending.
7/10/21, 8:53 PM
Great Story!
Anonymous
7/10/21, 8:50 PM
I liked it.
Anonymous
7/10/21, 8:24 PM
Fantastic conclusion! The whole series has been so well written that I’m gonna be sad to see it end, but at the same time it ends on such a great conclusion I don’t think I’d want it to continue
7/10/21, 6:01 PM
Where is the hypnosis?
7/10/21, 5:25 PM
Oh, I'd love to see more of Mr. Jabour!!!
7/10/21, 4:05 PM
que alegría ver que volviste con mas de esta historia :3 me encanto, la ame, y definitivamente quiero más 💙💙💙💙 Solo un comentario, deberias señalizar el cambio de protagonista... me tomo un tiempo darme.cuenta que ya no era la misma persona. Generalmente ponen algo.como "Jefe POV" (no recuerdo si alguna vez pusiste su nombre XD )
7/10/21, 3:26 PM
Wow. That was great. Super hot. A little mean but Chet seemed pretty happy in the end. At one point, I was thinking Jabour was going to give Chet a big dick to fuck Jabour with. It also seemed like Chet could say things to affect the outcome and I was kind of hoping he would to twist things. That might have added a bit more tension. Story was awesome as is though!
7/10/21, 2:54 PM
Expecting more of this verse. The concept is great!