Recent Comments

7/11/21, 6:54 AM
Wonderful. The visuals,the pacing, all of it.
7/11/21, 5:13 AM
A nice stinky story. And I mean that in the best possible way.
7/11/21, 4:14 AM
Nicely written. A story that drew me in, the descriptions became very visual. Thankyou for this.
7/8/21, 7:27 AM
Hot story. How is is true, is it your experience, or you know the person it happened to?

7/10/21, 12:37 PM
@Jonanator hi, its a rue story that happened with me. it was a blackmail/ domination. i wrote the story the way it ahopened elsewhere and then i rhought what would happen if i turned it into a hypnosis story as i am intruiged by that. so i took out the blackmail and mist elements of domination/ the force side to get this.

7/10/21, 5:49 PM
well, it is a great story@Davidc

7/11/21, 1:57 AM
@Jonanator thanks for that. any feedback is much appreciated
7/11/21, 1:53 AM
Hot falls short. Excellent ending.
7/10/21, 8:53 PM
Great Story!
Anonymous
7/10/21, 8:50 PM
I liked it.
Anonymous
7/10/21, 8:24 PM
Fantastic conclusion! The whole series has been so well written that I’m gonna be sad to see it end, but at the same time it ends on such a great conclusion I don’t think I’d want it to continue
7/10/21, 6:01 PM
Where is the hypnosis?
7/10/21, 5:25 PM
Oh, I'd love to see more of Mr. Jabour!!!