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mbblover
7/10/21, 1:11 PM
any chance of a new story (with many chapters and a slow burn) of a superhero, a supremely incredibly huge musclebound handsome and beyond virile, masculine, 100% hetero in a light colored leotard tights outfit that leaves nothing to the imagination from the front or the back conquered and converted? beyond cocky, a total flirt with the ladies but because of his moral code he only flirts, because he is SUPREME MAN his outrageous blatant outfit is ignored because he does such good work. hypnotized, secretly drugged or secretly brainwashed by the much lesser "villian" (i.e a old bony weak man, a overweight plain looking man, etc.)
Anonymous
7/10/21, 8:24 AM
I just the line 'he was a little jealous that Austin got to choose the type of tie he could wear.' not jealous of everyone who wasn't a slave but jealous he couldn't pick between a tie and a bow tie!! Really loved this story.
Jan 3, 2021
Thiago
7/10/21, 5:07 AM
wow i love this.
7/10/21, 12:25 AM
Great Story!
Anonymous
7/9/21, 11:16 PM
Now that the series would seem to be at an end, I'm curious what the originally intended darker direction was going to be....
7/9/21, 8:51 PM
This was really well written and built up the suspense. I love the surprise that Hawksmoor has actually whored Scottie out. And that may very well have been the plan all along. Thank you.
Jon
7/9/21, 8:51 PM
Hot ending. I loved the story. Hope you got more amazing stories to come.
7/9/21, 8:04 PM
I'm glad they can live their own lives after they earn the money spent on them back. Will they stay exactly as they are or revert some to old self when they are let go? I wonder.
7/9/21, 7:33 PM
Love your stories and this one is no exception. I'm wondering if Hawksmoor is telling the truth about Ben and where he is. He seems to have lied to and manipulated Scott from the beginning, is he actually whoring Ben out too? Also very intrigued to find out who the narrator is and what his connection to Scott/Hawksmoor/Ben is. looking forward to the next chapter
7/9/21, 7:16 PM
Oh, damn, this is undoubtedly my favorite entry on this challenge. Sal being perpetually drunk and stupidified was my favorite thing on this story.