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7/9/21, 8:51 PM
This was really well written and built up the suspense. I love the surprise that Hawksmoor has actually whored Scottie out. And that may very well have been the plan all along. Thank you.
Jon
7/9/21, 8:51 PM
Hot ending. I loved the story. Hope you got more amazing stories to come.
7/9/21, 8:04 PM
I'm glad they can live their own lives after they earn the money spent on them back. Will they stay exactly as they are or revert some to old self when they are let go? I wonder.
7/9/21, 7:33 PM
Love your stories and this one is no exception. I'm wondering if Hawksmoor is telling the truth about Ben and where he is. He seems to have lied to and manipulated Scott from the beginning, is he actually whoring Ben out too? Also very intrigued to find out who the narrator is and what his connection to Scott/Hawksmoor/Ben is. looking forward to the next chapter
7/9/21, 7:16 PM
Oh, damn, this is undoubtedly my favorite entry on this challenge. Sal being perpetually drunk and stupidified was my favorite thing on this story.
7/9/21, 6:34 PM
Jesus this was amazing. Fuck my entry, I want this to win!
7/9/21, 6:10 PM
Ohh, perfect, I was waiting for the next chapter! It was great and hot from start to finish, but my favorite part was Scottie visiting the pet shop to make his purchases. Great debasement and humiliating moment! Five stars in all categories!
Anonymous
7/9/21, 5:11 PM
This was hot!! I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!
Anonymous
7/9/21, 5:00 PM
A really hot induction! Although I was a little disappointed by how little you capitalised on the fact that you were using Death Note characters. Feels like this could’ve been written about any two guys and had almost the same effect
boycream
7/9/21, 3:01 PM
god i love this story, excellent job!! like others i keep coming back to this. gotta agree with giveintothemusk about the armpit huffing and just absolutely love when Max knowingly counts off his boy's orgasms 💖