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Anonymous
7/8/21, 1:16 PM
Holy shit, this was super hot!
7/8/21, 9:20 AM
Make this comment to say: at first when I read it, I did not have a good impression and didn't hold the story in high regard. But you brought something to the table that I rarely have seen in others: a conclusive and logical ending, a good foreshadowing and hinting, a comprehensive and smooth story. To be honest, the story is not my taste, but it is always one of my recommendation now. Let's say, I don't love the story, but I love the author.

7/8/21, 12:45 PM
@Theodore And I love this comment! I always spend a lot of time on stuff like foreshadowing and tone and character logic. For instance, I took some time to brainstorm why an otherwise smart character like Brian wouldn't immediately figure out that Lexeed and Lex are Dr. Gould and his assistant--or why Dr. Gould wouldn't have immediately called for help when he realized he was being affected by Lex's pheromones. (By the way, the word in his static-filled distress call they can't fully understand in Chapter 1 is "Hazmat"). And I never know how many readers are actually appreciating this work. So it's great to hear from someone who does!
7/8/21, 6:19 AM
Thanks for the comment man. I'll bare that in mind
7/8/21, 1:14 AM
Such a great story. I feel it doesn't matter who our protagonist was, he, as an individual, was wrong. He exists in his submission, his surrender as his taken over completely. He finds ecstasy and meaning in his subservience to his master and it was so expertly described. Kudos.
Anonymous
7/7/21, 11:58 PM
Excellent work thank you very much

7/8/21, 12:53 AM
Thank you for the read and comment. And more will be on the way 😁
7/8/21, 12:11 AM
Did you write this just for me? It's perfect! Pheromones, scent, cum, resistance (which is so well detailed in the log) and finally, the inevitable. I love stories in which a group of guys go one by one. The conclusion makes me want to go back and read from the beginning now that I know who Lex and Lexeed are. Now I'm hungry for cum.
7/7/21, 8:53 PM
Many thanks for this chapter. I felt it was a rather subtle and progressive story line. Scott is gradually, bit by bit, being taken somewhere he didn't know he really wanted to go.
7/7/21, 8:20 PM
Loved everything about this, especially the caging and discipline. Would absolutely love to see more of this story, your sex scenes are incredible.
7/7/21, 8:01 PM
This is so hot. you are such an amazing writer!!
7/7/21, 7:38 PM
I love the ending for this, especially that Danny had retained some of his intelligence. I'm sure that in the future that won't last if he keeps getting fucked by Lex. I'll also echo one of the other commenters that the diary entries were an excellent touch. Seeing the doctor's hubris be the thing that sets about his conversion elevated this conclusion to this very nicely.