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7/7/21, 4:05 AM
Awesomely creative!

7/7/21, 11:29 AM
Thank you for the read and feedback ๐Ÿ™‚@FreeThinker
7/7/21, 9:32 AM
A little different from the first two but so hot! Didn't know that there would be part 3, really cool! Maybe next can be a story of beta boy in Lucas' body) Thank you! Can't wait for more!
Anonymous
7/7/21, 7:40 AM
Greaaat !!! I am waiting the next story !!
7/7/21, 7:33 AM
loved it. looking forward to more stories in this genre
7/7/21, 6:55 AM
hot as hell man thanks
Anonymous
7/7/21, 6:49 AM
I'm sure all of us would love to read a prequal or a sequal or tbh anything you want to write!! I hope you have been having a good few months :)
7/7/21, 6:47 AM
Great world-building at the beginning. When we get to the stuff with Jet, I wanted a little more detail about his relationship with the narrator. I totally get where you're going with the resolution, but I found it hard to get emotionally invested because the main characters didn't feel fleshed out enough.
7/7/21, 6:19 AM
Great start loves it!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
7/7/21, 6:06 AM
Wรณร“ร”ร’รฒF!๐Ÿป such a hot story!
Conversion Enthusiast
7/7/21, 4:00 AM
Wow it's moderately late where I am (at least for a work day). You're a very poetic writer and I really appreciated it, the way corridor corridor coori.... Door. But also since I love superhero conversion brainwash mind control.... You hit me right where I love it haha. A way with words that are unique here too. Actually.... I don't think I know who you are.... But if I were to guess based on the happiness of what I just read, I might have a guess of who you are and yet km thinking you're a new author (or at least one I don't have on my radar yet). Bravo. And now I can sleep. Well written =) give or take a couple typos. Either way, looking forward to more material from ya.