Recent Comments

7/7/21, 6:47 AM
Great world-building at the beginning. When we get to the stuff with Jet, I wanted a little more detail about his relationship with the narrator. I totally get where you're going with the resolution, but I found it hard to get emotionally invested because the main characters didn't feel fleshed out enough.
7/7/21, 6:19 AM
Great start loves it!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
7/7/21, 6:06 AM
Wรณร“ร”ร’รฒF!๐Ÿป such a hot story!
Conversion Enthusiast
7/7/21, 4:00 AM
Wow it's moderately late where I am (at least for a work day). You're a very poetic writer and I really appreciated it, the way corridor corridor coori.... Door. But also since I love superhero conversion brainwash mind control.... You hit me right where I love it haha. A way with words that are unique here too. Actually.... I don't think I know who you are.... But if I were to guess based on the happiness of what I just read, I might have a guess of who you are and yet km thinking you're a new author (or at least one I don't have on my radar yet). Bravo. And now I can sleep. Well written =) give or take a couple typos. Either way, looking forward to more material from ya.
Jun 10, 2021
7/7/21, 3:52 AM
I get that this was a revenge story but it was a little too hateful for me. I ended up just feeling bad for the protagonist and hating the transformer.
7/7/21, 3:38 AM
Kind of a dark turn at the end, but it was pretty well telegraphed and it fit. Excellent writing, descriptions, very erotic. Great job.
7/7/21, 3:30 AM
Hotttt. Hope more is to come.
Anonymous
7/7/21, 3:26 AM
This was hot! Went back and read the others. Hot, hot hot!!!
Willie Cici
7/7/21, 3:25 AM
Great ending!! Great story and well written.
7/7/21, 3:23 AM
Thank you so much for continuing this incredibly hot story.