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7/7/21, 6:19 AM
Great start loves it!!! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
7/7/21, 6:06 AM
Wรณร“ร”ร’รฒF!๐Ÿป such a hot story!
Conversion Enthusiast
7/7/21, 4:00 AM
Wow it's moderately late where I am (at least for a work day). You're a very poetic writer and I really appreciated it, the way corridor corridor coori.... Door. But also since I love superhero conversion brainwash mind control.... You hit me right where I love it haha. A way with words that are unique here too. Actually.... I don't think I know who you are.... But if I were to guess based on the happiness of what I just read, I might have a guess of who you are and yet km thinking you're a new author (or at least one I don't have on my radar yet). Bravo. And now I can sleep. Well written =) give or take a couple typos. Either way, looking forward to more material from ya.
Jun 10, 2021
7/7/21, 3:52 AM
I get that this was a revenge story but it was a little too hateful for me. I ended up just feeling bad for the protagonist and hating the transformer.
7/7/21, 3:38 AM
Kind of a dark turn at the end, but it was pretty well telegraphed and it fit. Excellent writing, descriptions, very erotic. Great job.
7/7/21, 3:30 AM
Hotttt. Hope more is to come.
Anonymous
7/7/21, 3:26 AM
This was hot! Went back and read the others. Hot, hot hot!!!
Willie Cici
7/7/21, 3:25 AM
Great ending!! Great story and well written.
7/7/21, 3:23 AM
Thank you so much for continuing this incredibly hot story.
7/6/21, 5:20 AM
I think I know who this is. Did you participate in the Halloween 2020 contest? This was great. It gave me the cellar of the "Cabin in the Woods" image with the "Friday the 13th - the series" feels. I really enjoyed this and hope that there will be more stories from this. Good Stuff!

7/6/21, 1:10 PM
@Redneck Cubby I think I described this as "Cabin in the Woods but a karmic justice fantasy" when my boyfriend asked what I was writing! I'm glad you enjoyed!

7/7/21, 2:32 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) So So Good. I totally got it. I picture myself grabbing the sheriff badge hanging from the fishing line. Unless a pair of Motor Patrol Boots fall out from somewhere. ๐Ÿ˜‰ You are one of my top 3 so far. I'm reading everyone's entry just to be fair Please continue this somehow.