Recent Comments

Marc
7/5/21, 5:40 PM
I love so much how you're dong the POV of the hypnotised, like , when everything seems normal to him, when he had to explain how to do the moon, speak chinese without realising it etc etc

7/5/21, 9:34 PM
@Marc Many thanks! That justification process is definitely a lot of fun and hot for me - how could I make it seem like a normal mind was rationalizing that, etc.? It's an exciting challenge!

Marc
7/6/21, 11:11 AM
@StageShowMM yeah ! First time i see something like that and i love it a lot ! keep the awesome work
7/6/21, 10:40 AM
That was fun, and I appreciate the irony, as the say, be careful what you wish for, you may get it
Anonymous
7/6/21, 9:15 AM
What a great story excellent terrific thanks
7/6/21, 8:33 AM
WOW. I wasn't expecting a Tobe Hooper's or George Romero's movie- like ending for this story. It's not a complain, of course, I love the films of those masters of horror, so I love this ending so much. It was a great story from start o finish, a total pleasure to read. It's a new favorite of mine.

7/6/21, 8:40 AM
@Plymouth58 Yeah, that ending was a late decision. Originally, I was going to do my much more standard ending, where the last holdout (Brian) falls, then add a brief epilogue where Brian (now thinking of himself as just another Lexeed) still retains the intelligence to pilot the boat back to the mainland. But then I thought about whether there were more creative ways to end the story and still get that "spreading sex-zombie virus" vibe that I wanted. Also, in previous parts I'd mentioned the soldiers carrying pistols. So with Chekhov's gun and all, that shooting scene just made sense.
Jack
7/6/21, 8:39 AM
I cannot believe that I actually get to have another chapter in one of my most favorite stories of all time! Welcome back, author! Please write more. I don't think I could make it another 13 years.
Anonymous
7/6/21, 7:10 AM
Woah! That was a great journey!
7/6/21, 7:07 AM
This was great. I can’t tell you how thrilled l am to see a new chapter of this story!
7/6/21, 6:17 AM
Really well written and keeps getting better and better. Looking forward to seeing more of Jase and hopefully, his humiliation too.
Anonymous
11/8/17, 4:11 AM
Yeah. But what are the consequences. Need a choose your own adventure where he doesn’t finish. What? Does he end up with no dick? Sweet tho.

Anonymous
7/6/21, 5:44 AM
Right?? I admit, I was very conflicted- I really enjoyed the story and how it turned out, and didn’t really want it derailed. But you can’t just bring up THE CONSEQUENCES to me and expect me to be happy not knowing them!
7/6/21, 5:35 AM
Thanks for a great story. It got me going. I can't understand why Reese would want to loose like that, but that added to the interest. Everyone has different desires, and I liked the fact they ended up happy in the end, while also now being objectified studs