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7/6/21, 6:51 PM
Great Story! Will there be more? I hope so.
7/6/21, 6:44 PM
One of my favorite stories of all time. So happy to have you back and continuing it. It is excellent!!!!
7/3/21, 11:26 PM
I have half the chapter done, but I'm a bit stuck with writer's block. No promises, but maybe by the middle of July? Really depends on inspiration.

7/3/21, 11:31 PM
@bluesuedewho I see, I hope inspiration strikes then

7/6/21, 6:34 PM
@bluesuedewho I also hope that you find inspiration soon. I have been checking this site vigorously for weeks waiting for the next chapter.
7/6/21, 3:44 PM
I love this ending. I always enjoy when a protagonist has their hopes snuffed out by the discovery of someone that they think could save them has already been compromised. I'm reminded of when the protagonist of 'Watching the Game' receives a call from his father only to discover that he's already been taken. Good work on this one!
7/6/21, 3:31 PM
more more more! when is the next chapter?
Anonymous
7/6/21, 2:12 PM
never enough Hímringyós
7/6/21, 1:57 PM
Glad to have you back ! another masterpiece written by an amazing writer.
7/6/21, 11:28 AM
Brilliant! Glad to see more of this!
Marc
7/5/21, 5:40 PM
I love so much how you're dong the POV of the hypnotised, like , when everything seems normal to him, when he had to explain how to do the moon, speak chinese without realising it etc etc

7/5/21, 9:34 PM
@Marc Many thanks! That justification process is definitely a lot of fun and hot for me - how could I make it seem like a normal mind was rationalizing that, etc.? It's an exciting challenge!

Marc
7/6/21, 11:11 AM
@StageShowMM yeah ! First time i see something like that and i love it a lot ! keep the awesome work
7/6/21, 10:40 AM
That was fun, and I appreciate the irony, as the say, be careful what you wish for, you may get it