Recent Comments

7/6/21, 5:35 AM
Thanks for a great story. It got me going. I can't understand why Reese would want to loose like that, but that added to the interest. Everyone has different desires, and I liked the fact they ended up happy in the end, while also now being objectified studs
boi98229
7/6/21, 5:23 AM
Wow! i love this story! It pulls me so strongly even farther in the direction of happily sleepily submitting, obeying, and serving a hypnomaster. i could feel every pulse of electricity, of pleasure, and mind-numbing relaxation, haze...
7/6/21, 4:55 AM
I too would like to know about the kind soldier. How did he fare under the curse?
7/6/21, 3:33 AM
Always love to see a historically themed story on the site! Well done man!
Willie Cici
7/6/21, 2:53 AM
I must have missed this when you posted it. Incredible! Loved everything about it. Well done!!!!
7/5/21, 10:12 AM
Definitely my favorite of the three stories you posted yesterday! And it featured one of your trademarks, the description of someone's voice as "effete"! I just wish it had been a little longer; I would have liked to have seen more scenes of Marcus Justus struggling with the effects of the gypsy curse he unwittingly unleashed.

Willie Cici
7/6/21, 2:48 AM
@Hypnothrill I have no problem, and in fact, encourage you to take up the story and take in the direction you suggest. You are great story teller and I would have no problem if you want to add a chapter. This is not an insult, nor should you take it as such. My limited inspiration took me this far. I would love to see where you take it. FYI - The original inspiration, believe it or not, was 'Il Trovatore'.
7/6/21, 2:03 AM
I love military men getting transformed. Excellent!
7/6/21, 1:41 AM
I wanted to love this story. I agree with the previous comment that the guys transformations were told too soon. I sort of lost interest in reading it once I read that knowing how it was going to play out. Don't get me wrong, this has the makings of a really good story, it has a lot of promise for both high stakes and transformations. Sometimes when you over focus on one, the other gets lost in the writing. With something that has multiple moving pieces, you may want to try to balance it out and keep people guessing. If they know how the story is going to go in the first few paragraphs then what would keep them engaged? Keep them in the story? I love the transformations you do have. Keep writing, keep working at this, and keep knowing that in the end you wont make everyone happy. This is after all your story, you get to tell it how you want to tell it, and that's all anyone needs to consider when reading.
Anonymous
7/6/21, 12:15 AM
Such a hot story! Loved this and hope there's more!
blankbot
7/5/21, 11:17 PM
Very, very nice.