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Anonymous
7/5/21, 3:26 PM
So what happens when a hybrid Neanderthal gestates another species like a Rottweiler dog?

7/5/21, 3:32 PM
Well that's definitely not an area I've put thought into. 😅 Not really my thing..."Were" creatures ( Werewolves, Werecats, Werebears..ect) are one thing, but not really into full beastility. I suppose if it did occur that would be the result...a humanoid version of the creature ingested.
Anonymous
7/5/21, 3:15 PM
This is a great short story! I wonder what's next for Andrew!
3/15/21, 3:54 AM
I've got most of the next chapter, but I'm trying to figure out how I want to land the ending before I put anymore out there. Just wait...I mean, it's only been three years of cliffhanger ;)

5/26/21, 9:32 AM
@Derek Williams just reread this, glad to see it's going to continue! ;)

5/26/21, 12:09 PM
@Derek Williams I see, let see how it goes

Doug
7/5/21, 2:55 PM
great to hear @Derek Williams
7/5/21, 2:26 PM
omg, this is such a good story. i cant wait for the next chapter
7/5/21, 2:24 PM
woof. another hot chapter. love the coach and dad. can't wait to see what happens next and the new story ideas you have
7/5/21, 1:16 PM
Curses in Romanian look pretty impressive on the page even if a tad anachronistic
7/5/21, 12:34 PM
wow!! really really loved how you wrote Sammy's transformation and everything about Daddy's musk 💖 i wish i could get some of that gooey creamy syrup too 🤤
Anonymous
6/23/21, 4:34 AM
Not to be pedantic or anything, but if the Kingdom of Pryde is...well, a Kingdom, why is its territory defined as nations? Wouldn't, for example, provinces or vassal states be a more accurate descriptor? Also, Naga? Interesting choice. In most settings that I'm familiar with, the Naga are a primarily aquatic race and their involvement in the surface usually extends to raiding/interacting with coastal territories, not forest fortresses. Cool. Overall, interesting read!

6/23/21, 5:19 AM
Yeah I was trying to go for like an Oz thing where the whole land is Oz, but it has the four countries Winkie, Glikin, Munchkin, Quadling. But yeah I get how it can be confusing. And maybe in future chapters I can explain it a bit better. As for my Naga, I really do not know much about them other than they have the lower half being a snake tail. But he is Vesper's captain of his personal bodyguards, so he travels all over with the Wizard. Perhaps though I will research the creatures a bit further before the next chapter. Thank you for all the input and feedback 😄

Anonymous
7/5/21, 4:05 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Thanks for your response! The Oz thing completely went over my head lol Looking forward to it!

7/5/21, 11:16 AM
I always enjoy responding to any readers who leave a comment or feedback. The Wizard of Oz, is one of my favorite stories, so I enjoy incorporating little details from it into my work. And chapter 2 is underway, hope to have it up by the end of the week.
Anonymous
7/5/21, 10:46 AM
more lexeed to go!!
ShitPig
7/5/21, 9:28 AM
Still cumming back to this ;) One of my favorites since 2018 🐖