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lakritz24
7/5/21, 9:37 PM
There is one word in German in the text. Now al aboud the Borg. oh i know this creature. i have recognized it. its a living creature. i have tracking it an feeding. greetings both, you and the ceature. J. J. Z.
7/5/21, 5:06 PM
I don't really go for the humiliation, but the gradual loss of control the main character is experiencing is very hot! Not sure how I'd missed the first couple of chapters, but definitely following it now. More please!
Anonymous
7/5/21, 3:26 PM
So what happens when a hybrid Neanderthal gestates another species like a Rottweiler dog?

7/5/21, 3:32 PM
Well that's definitely not an area I've put thought into. 😅 Not really my thing..."Were" creatures ( Werewolves, Werecats, Werebears..ect) are one thing, but not really into full beastility. I suppose if it did occur that would be the result...a humanoid version of the creature ingested.
Anonymous
7/5/21, 3:15 PM
This is a great short story! I wonder what's next for Andrew!
3/15/21, 3:54 AM
I've got most of the next chapter, but I'm trying to figure out how I want to land the ending before I put anymore out there. Just wait...I mean, it's only been three years of cliffhanger ;)

5/26/21, 9:32 AM
@Derek Williams just reread this, glad to see it's going to continue! ;)

5/26/21, 12:09 PM
@Derek Williams I see, let see how it goes

Doug
7/5/21, 2:55 PM
great to hear @Derek Williams
7/5/21, 2:26 PM
omg, this is such a good story. i cant wait for the next chapter
7/5/21, 2:24 PM
woof. another hot chapter. love the coach and dad. can't wait to see what happens next and the new story ideas you have
7/5/21, 1:16 PM
Curses in Romanian look pretty impressive on the page even if a tad anachronistic
7/5/21, 12:34 PM
wow!! really really loved how you wrote Sammy's transformation and everything about Daddy's musk 💖 i wish i could get some of that gooey creamy syrup too 🤤
Anonymous
6/23/21, 4:34 AM
Not to be pedantic or anything, but if the Kingdom of Pryde is...well, a Kingdom, why is its territory defined as nations? Wouldn't, for example, provinces or vassal states be a more accurate descriptor? Also, Naga? Interesting choice. In most settings that I'm familiar with, the Naga are a primarily aquatic race and their involvement in the surface usually extends to raiding/interacting with coastal territories, not forest fortresses. Cool. Overall, interesting read!

6/23/21, 5:19 AM
Yeah I was trying to go for like an Oz thing where the whole land is Oz, but it has the four countries Winkie, Glikin, Munchkin, Quadling. But yeah I get how it can be confusing. And maybe in future chapters I can explain it a bit better. As for my Naga, I really do not know much about them other than they have the lower half being a snake tail. But he is Vesper's captain of his personal bodyguards, so he travels all over with the Wizard. Perhaps though I will research the creatures a bit further before the next chapter. Thank you for all the input and feedback 😄

Anonymous
7/5/21, 4:05 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Thanks for your response! The Oz thing completely went over my head lol Looking forward to it!

7/5/21, 11:16 AM
I always enjoy responding to any readers who leave a comment or feedback. The Wizard of Oz, is one of my favorite stories, so I enjoy incorporating little details from it into my work. And chapter 2 is underway, hope to have it up by the end of the week.