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Anonymous
7/5/21, 10:23 PM
**“And if I ever see you touch another drop of drink, if I ever see you mistreat your wife or another orphan again,” he brought his muzzled, fanged, face next to the frightened man’s ear, “I will EAT you… ALIVE!”** BAD ASS! I love it!
Anonymous
7/5/21, 10:19 PM
Loved how Brunaulf killed that bastard. He deserved every second of torment!
7/5/21, 10:06 PM
Great story! Very enjoyable build.
Anonymous
7/5/21, 9:41 PM
Some interesting ideas, but feels like you play your hand too soon. Within the first couple of paragraphs we know exactly how the guys want to be transformed, and that Reese is going to throw the competition. Everything after that goes pretty much exactly as expected, which rather lessens the stakes

Anonymous
7/5/21, 9:51 PM
@True, but the focus was not so much on the risks of the competition and more so on the transformations and the actions that led up to each one, and mainly how Reese was enjoying things going his way. There were a few points in the story where it almost seemed like things would not go right for Reese's plans.
lakritz24
7/5/21, 9:37 PM
There is one word in German in the text. Now al aboud the Borg. oh i know this creature. i have recognized it. its a living creature. i have tracking it an feeding. greetings both, you and the ceature. J. J. Z.
7/5/21, 5:06 PM
I don't really go for the humiliation, but the gradual loss of control the main character is experiencing is very hot! Not sure how I'd missed the first couple of chapters, but definitely following it now. More please!
Anonymous
7/5/21, 3:26 PM
So what happens when a hybrid Neanderthal gestates another species like a Rottweiler dog?

7/5/21, 3:32 PM
Well that's definitely not an area I've put thought into. 😅 Not really my thing..."Were" creatures ( Werewolves, Werecats, Werebears..ect) are one thing, but not really into full beastility. I suppose if it did occur that would be the result...a humanoid version of the creature ingested.
Anonymous
7/5/21, 3:15 PM
This is a great short story! I wonder what's next for Andrew!
3/15/21, 3:54 AM
I've got most of the next chapter, but I'm trying to figure out how I want to land the ending before I put anymore out there. Just wait...I mean, it's only been three years of cliffhanger ;)

5/26/21, 9:32 AM
@Derek Williams just reread this, glad to see it's going to continue! ;)

5/26/21, 12:09 PM
@Derek Williams I see, let see how it goes

Doug
7/5/21, 2:55 PM
great to hear @Derek Williams
7/5/21, 2:26 PM
omg, this is such a good story. i cant wait for the next chapter