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7/5/21, 2:24 PM
woof. another hot chapter. love the coach and dad. can't wait to see what happens next and the new story ideas you have
7/5/21, 1:16 PM
Curses in Romanian look pretty impressive on the page even if a tad anachronistic
7/5/21, 12:34 PM
wow!! really really loved how you wrote Sammy's transformation and everything about Daddy's musk 💖 i wish i could get some of that gooey creamy syrup too 🤤
Anonymous
6/23/21, 4:34 AM
Not to be pedantic or anything, but if the Kingdom of Pryde is...well, a Kingdom, why is its territory defined as nations? Wouldn't, for example, provinces or vassal states be a more accurate descriptor? Also, Naga? Interesting choice. In most settings that I'm familiar with, the Naga are a primarily aquatic race and their involvement in the surface usually extends to raiding/interacting with coastal territories, not forest fortresses. Cool. Overall, interesting read!

6/23/21, 5:19 AM
Yeah I was trying to go for like an Oz thing where the whole land is Oz, but it has the four countries Winkie, Glikin, Munchkin, Quadling. But yeah I get how it can be confusing. And maybe in future chapters I can explain it a bit better. As for my Naga, I really do not know much about them other than they have the lower half being a snake tail. But he is Vesper's captain of his personal bodyguards, so he travels all over with the Wizard. Perhaps though I will research the creatures a bit further before the next chapter. Thank you for all the input and feedback 😄

Anonymous
7/5/21, 4:05 AM
@The Author (name hidden due to challenge) Thanks for your response! The Oz thing completely went over my head lol Looking forward to it!

7/5/21, 11:16 AM
I always enjoy responding to any readers who leave a comment or feedback. The Wizard of Oz, is one of my favorite stories, so I enjoy incorporating little details from it into my work. And chapter 2 is underway, hope to have it up by the end of the week.
Anonymous
7/5/21, 10:46 AM
more lexeed to go!!
ShitPig
7/5/21, 9:28 AM
Still cumming back to this ;) One of my favorites since 2018 🐖
7/5/21, 8:26 AM
very hot story! thanks, cant wait for the next chapter. .want lexseed too ...
Rob
5/18/21, 6:44 AM
This hit on one my own favorite perversions, the combination of muscle, narcissism and humiliation.

Anonymous
7/5/21, 7:58 AM
@Rob ditto!
Scott
7/4/21, 8:02 AM
Great. made me very worked up reading it. keep the story going.

7/5/21, 4:32 AM
@Scott That's good to hear, thanks for liking my work. Now I got decide what to do for chapter 2. I'm always open to suggestions. Fill free to say anything.
Anonymous
7/5/21, 4:22 AM
Loved this story!! Loved the ending!!!