Recent Comments

7/4/21, 9:16 PM
i so wish you'd finish this story!
7/4/21, 8:39 PM
what happened to the nice soldier? Nice story BTW. Very creative.
Jan 26, 2007
7/4/21, 8:20 PM
I'm assuming Mark will get his youth back through a future transference with someone else? If not then The Professor gets almost 2 lifetimes and Mark loses more than half of his. That's not a fair exchange even for wisdom and maturity.
Anonymous
7/4/21, 8:02 PM
Amazing!
7/4/21, 7:26 PM
So real that I can just about smell it as I read.
Anonymous
7/4/21, 6:18 PM
Absolutely fantastic! I can't wait to read what Jake does next!
7/4/21, 6:17 PM
Daddy Bear and son, Andy who? Mark would never have gone to collage growing up with His Daddy the Trucker
7/4/21, 6:15 PM
No word of a lie, I was thinking of entering the contest with a story so similar... but this is too good! Congrats. My fave so far. ☺️
Zac
7/4/21, 5:13 PM
Need to breed. Need Lexseed. Need to breed. Need Lexseed…
7/4/21, 5:08 PM
I spent all day working on the final chapter, which ended up a lot longer than I had intended (5500 words, slightly longer than the first three chapters combined). I'll wait a couple of days to post it, but I think you guys will like it.