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7/4/21, 4:30 PM
Of all four chapters so far, I love this one the most. At least we got to see some redeemable qualities.
7/4/21, 6:49 AM
Thank you all! I'm so glad that there are people out there that appreciate what I've written. It'll definitely encourage me to keep at it!

7/4/21, 4:20 PM
@Sorotrick now that i know its you, YES PLEASE write more!!! you write the beat stuff I favorited your other story mixed pack!!!
Anonymous
7/4/21, 6:03 AM
Great concept, quite a few formatting and spelling errors. If you’re in the discord, don’t be afraid to ask someone to proofread!! Apart from that, lovely story

7/4/21, 4:19 PM
I'll work on it. I just joined the discord and left a message in the writing workshop. I have another story that follows this that is 35-40 chapters it will likely be riddled with issues...yikes.
Anonymous
7/4/21, 2:51 PM
Need Lexseed! Your stuff is always so hot Hypnothrill
Anonymous
7/4/21, 2:33 PM
wow!!
Anonymous
7/4/21, 2:17 PM
terrific
7/4/21, 1:42 PM
I hope you write more Warehouse stories!
7/4/21, 12:48 PM
Thank you so much for deliver this piece of fantasy out of this world. I just found out your page this morning and decided to read all of the chapters. I love every details that you portrait the characters, especially Willem of how complex his thought and personality. Can't wait for the new sequel and all of your works in the future. Thank you for giving the readers such a fascinating experience!
Anonymous
7/4/21, 12:45 PM
great story! would be hot if they picked up Andy
7/3/21, 1:10 PM
I really enjoyed the twist toward the end and that it turned out not to be a "bad end" despite this being in the revenge genre! Nicely done!

7/4/21, 12:11 PM
@time.to.occur yeah at the end of it all I figured Ollie wouldn't be so cruel as to like, leave them disgusted and horrified at being cursed. He wants them to suffer but then he wants to fuck the hot guys that have been bullying him for years. Maybe something for a follow-up story!