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Anonymous
6/30/21, 11:09 PM
Hope some real personality changes happen. Like language change and more coarse or swearing since he seems like such a good boy, maybe things like smoking cigarettes stuff like that, things that really change who will has been

6/30/21, 11:19 PM
Yes, actually in the next chapter he will get a very different personality.
6/30/21, 5:36 PM
hotttt. Hope there is more to come.

6/30/21, 9:27 PM
@Jonanator as the corrector of the translation, I can affirm chapter 3 is on the horizon. And that Math_Reez and I are very happy you find that chapter hot.
6/30/21, 9:17 PM
Really enjoyed this latest chapter and the developing intrigue! I especially love how Charley's perspective on his synthetic body has changed over time. Looking forward to seeing what comes next!
6/30/21, 4:27 PM
The parts I read were pretty hot but it becomes pretty difficult to read with how it's formatted. Some more paragraph breaks could help, especially during the conversations

6/30/21, 8:44 PM
@ThisisDiz agred
MuscleCub
6/30/21, 4:33 PM
I'll leave the story here while I go on break. Enjoy!
6/30/21, 4:33 PM
Love it!
6/30/21, 4:27 PM
You named one more character, if I was right, I wonder how hot would Garret be, I see him as a bit of a teddy bear
6/30/21, 11:59 AM
love this! hope you continue writing more chapters!
6/30/21, 10:52 AM
Thank you so much for the story. I will be keeping an eye on it.
6/30/21, 10:04 AM
I hope the coach becames a bear