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6/29/21, 8:02 PM
Looking forward to more parts and see Ryder and Mark Get together, in collage and beon. Ok, not up to me.
CMC
6/29/21, 7:29 PM
This is extremely hot. I would have loved some details about the changes Eric made to himself, but I enjoy the 'falling for the person you hate' plot.
6/29/21, 6:14 PM
let one of them be his wife, act and dress like they are jake's wife, please.
6/29/21, 6:09 PM
Beautiful work this far man, I'm looking forward to seeing more of it!
6/29/21, 4:03 PM
Well I can say that I am not a fan of him loosing the powers. Its actually a bit frustrating to be honest. Beyond that the buying a gym element is cool and so is the father stopping his escort work.
Jun 29, 2021
6/29/21, 4:01 PM
Welcome back
6/29/21, 3:45 PM
Me gusta bastante la idea (a quién no le gustaría cojerse al jefe), pero siento que la ejecución podría mejorar, en especial la redacción. La puntuación la siento un pcoo descuidada y faltan algunos acentos. Siento que poniéndole un poco más de atención a eso esta historia mejoraría mucho. Me gusta cómo manejas la perspectiva del pasante que busca ponerse en control.
6/29/21, 1:24 PM
Just wanted to be another voice saying that this was super hot and I can't wait to read another chapter! I definitely didn't mind that the bottle erased the homophobia quickly; I don't think any of us come here looking for realism and it got us to the hot part right on time. Keep trucking and thanks for posting :)
6/29/21, 11:52 AM
Oho, the plot thickens! This is great stuff man, you should be proud!
6/29/21, 11:13 AM
Very intrigued! I imagine our protagonist's eventual interview with a Priapist is gonna be fascinating!