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Jun 29, 2021
6/29/21, 8:52 PM
Aww, another triumph! Men, the right word to describe the way you handle the humiliation in your stories, it would be "succulent". For us who enjoy that particular kink, your prose is so delightful. 5 stars in all categories.
6/29/21, 8:02 PM
Looking forward to more parts and see Ryder and Mark Get together, in collage and beon. Ok, not up to me.
CMC
6/29/21, 7:29 PM
This is extremely hot. I would have loved some details about the changes Eric made to himself, but I enjoy the 'falling for the person you hate' plot.
6/29/21, 6:14 PM
let one of them be his wife, act and dress like they are jake's wife, please.
6/29/21, 6:09 PM
Beautiful work this far man, I'm looking forward to seeing more of it!
6/29/21, 4:03 PM
Well I can say that I am not a fan of him loosing the powers. Its actually a bit frustrating to be honest. Beyond that the buying a gym element is cool and so is the father stopping his escort work.
Jun 29, 2021
6/29/21, 4:01 PM
Welcome back
6/29/21, 3:45 PM
Me gusta bastante la idea (a quién no le gustaría cojerse al jefe), pero siento que la ejecución podría mejorar, en especial la redacción. La puntuación la siento un pcoo descuidada y faltan algunos acentos. Siento que poniéndole un poco más de atención a eso esta historia mejoraría mucho. Me gusta cómo manejas la perspectiva del pasante que busca ponerse en control.
6/29/21, 1:24 PM
Just wanted to be another voice saying that this was super hot and I can't wait to read another chapter! I definitely didn't mind that the bottle erased the homophobia quickly; I don't think any of us come here looking for realism and it got us to the hot part right on time. Keep trucking and thanks for posting :)
6/29/21, 11:52 AM
Oho, the plot thickens! This is great stuff man, you should be proud!