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6/29/21, 3:45 PM
Me gusta bastante la idea (a quién no le gustaría cojerse al jefe), pero siento que la ejecución podría mejorar, en especial la redacción. La puntuación la siento un pcoo descuidada y faltan algunos acentos. Siento que poniéndole un poco más de atención a eso esta historia mejoraría mucho. Me gusta cómo manejas la perspectiva del pasante que busca ponerse en control.
6/29/21, 1:24 PM
Just wanted to be another voice saying that this was super hot and I can't wait to read another chapter! I definitely didn't mind that the bottle erased the homophobia quickly; I don't think any of us come here looking for realism and it got us to the hot part right on time. Keep trucking and thanks for posting :)
6/29/21, 11:52 AM
Oho, the plot thickens! This is great stuff man, you should be proud!
6/29/21, 11:13 AM
Very intrigued! I imagine our protagonist's eventual interview with a Priapist is gonna be fascinating!
6/29/21, 11:03 AM
That is so cute, I hope Burnaulf is not a hidden villain
6/29/21, 10:14 AM
Welcome back🎉🎉🎉 once again a great chapter. Good thing for Jake that his already enslaved men stay like this even without his powers. He's got 4 hot guys,that's nothing to scoff at. Sad that the story is ending soon but it was to be expected still,it makes way for new series,which is awesome
Anonymous
6/29/21, 9:27 AM
Nice! I'm glad your back! This was an interesting development in the story, although i am a little disappointed that he can't add anymore slaves to his harem, its still going to be interesting to see the further development of Jake's relationships with his harem......
6/29/21, 9:26 AM
I really like the concept, I cannot wait for more.
boi98229
6/29/21, 8:18 AM
Very nice! i'm a sucker for a happy ending too, but happy and so kinky as well, that's a real winner!! Master is exactly the kind of Master i would love to find. It is fine to fantasize about being abducted, tortured, and used like a real slave, but in the end i know i want something akin to what Robin has found with his Master. At the very least it is a wonderful story! Thanks.
boi98229
6/29/21, 7:32 AM
Wow! So so hot, so thrilling yet so subtle. In a big way the subtlety added to the thrill. i'm still not sure quite how Robin's mind was swayed. i'm still not entirely sure he was controlled to any extraordinary degree, and yet somehow i know he must have been. i expect i am just as confused and enthralled as Robin. Like Robin, all i can do is accept Master's hospitality and go on. Just before i go though, i wish to thank you for the magical way you conjure magical stories. ;)) ~david