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6/29/21, 4:03 PM
Well I can say that I am not a fan of him loosing the powers. Its actually a bit frustrating to be honest. Beyond that the buying a gym element is cool and so is the father stopping his escort work.
Jun 29, 2021
6/29/21, 4:01 PM
Welcome back
6/29/21, 3:45 PM
Me gusta bastante la idea (a quién no le gustaría cojerse al jefe), pero siento que la ejecución podría mejorar, en especial la redacción. La puntuación la siento un pcoo descuidada y faltan algunos acentos. Siento que poniéndole un poco más de atención a eso esta historia mejoraría mucho. Me gusta cómo manejas la perspectiva del pasante que busca ponerse en control.
6/29/21, 1:24 PM
Just wanted to be another voice saying that this was super hot and I can't wait to read another chapter! I definitely didn't mind that the bottle erased the homophobia quickly; I don't think any of us come here looking for realism and it got us to the hot part right on time. Keep trucking and thanks for posting :)
6/29/21, 11:52 AM
Oho, the plot thickens! This is great stuff man, you should be proud!
6/29/21, 11:13 AM
Very intrigued! I imagine our protagonist's eventual interview with a Priapist is gonna be fascinating!
6/29/21, 11:03 AM
That is so cute, I hope Burnaulf is not a hidden villain
6/29/21, 10:14 AM
Welcome back🎉🎉🎉 once again a great chapter. Good thing for Jake that his already enslaved men stay like this even without his powers. He's got 4 hot guys,that's nothing to scoff at. Sad that the story is ending soon but it was to be expected still,it makes way for new series,which is awesome
Anonymous
6/29/21, 9:27 AM
Nice! I'm glad your back! This was an interesting development in the story, although i am a little disappointed that he can't add anymore slaves to his harem, its still going to be interesting to see the further development of Jake's relationships with his harem......
6/29/21, 9:26 AM
I really like the concept, I cannot wait for more.