Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/27/21, 4:20 AM
totally keep writing!! yes the style is a little different, but certainly not in a bad way. it's still extremely fun, well composed, and ticking the right boxes :). in terms of good vs bad ending, if i had to pick i'd choose the happier one since i'm quite a sap at heart. but in a perfect world, i would love to see how a blend of the two look: things getting as fucked up as possible and then half walked back so kyle ends up as a blend of his new and old self. his life isn't ruined and he isn't unrecognizable, he's still able to spend time with friends and be a human being, but all those kinks are gonna be pretty hardwired forever and he'll never be straight or nearly as smart as he was. i live for seeing once cocky straight guys having to find some kind of middle ground compromise with their identity and ending up much sluttier but also much happier than they were before. still, at the end of the day you're the author, and you should write whatever brings you the most joy!!

6/28/21, 8:21 AM
@ Hi! Thank you very much for your nice words, buddy! Is great to read all this positive feedback and encouraging comments, I'm glad you still like it, and I hope you keep enjoying with the upcoming chapters. Thanks for voting for the happier ending! I'll keep in mind your comments if I decide to go for that one. Although I like positive endings in general, I still enjoy a bad one from time to time, so at this point both possibilities sounds quite fun to write. I haven't decided yet and is very encouraging to see the readers have interest for both of them.
6/14/21, 4:24 PM
AMAZING STORY! Very well written! I'd like to see the story from the other side... maybe find out that Randall is also emitting a musk that makes Dylan more aggressively alpha. Interesting to see what would happen the longer they spend around each other. Would you be up to writing the other side?

6/14/21, 4:49 PM
Thank you, @QuinnDnvr! That _is_ actually the case. The mating bond between Alphas and omegas in the _Hierarch Industries_ setting is reciprocal. The Alpha's pheromones change the omega to better suit his Alpha's ideal omega and at the same time, the omega emits pheromones of his own that change his Alpha to better suit his ideal Alpha. I'm open to writing more about Randall and Dylan in the future but for now, my focus is firmly on other writing projects. I may come back around to them at some point, but I have no compelling reason to do so right now, unfortunately.

6/28/21, 7:28 AM
it would be great to see a bit more of them. i was expecting Dylan to start calling Randall "honey" at some point because of his comment earlier--thought it was a chekhov's gun scenario and would be cute. great story though, love your work! @Ethan White
6/26/21, 5:37 AM
this is great hoping you can continue it and make it more perverse in the follow ups.

6/26/21, 5:43 AM
@Hypnobot - it has its turns... the next one is more into romance... but after that things will change...

Anonymous
6/28/21, 6:19 AM
@Math_Reez 💙 Puedes escribir la nueva historia sobre el padre y sus hijos?
6/28/21, 1:21 AM
3!!!!
Anonymous
6/27/21, 11:26 PM
This is interesting. I don't think I've read a werebear story in a fantasy setting. I'm curious to see where this goes. It's a good start and I like the iconic master-pupil dynamic, very much a part of the classic hero's journey. I wonder if the master is a werebear and he's just not letting on to his student? Hope to see more from you soon.

MuscleCub
6/27/21, 11:35 PM
Thanks! like darkblade its a situation where I'd spoil it if I said anything one way or another. You'll just have to wait for future chapters. Thanks for your interest! I've been wanting to write a fantasy story for quite a while now, and things just seemed to click when I put this to paper. Enjoy!
6/27/21, 10:40 PM
Excellent beginning --- both in world-building and writing. I look forward to where you'll take the story next.

MuscleCub
6/27/21, 11:33 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! The story is complete so its just a matter of posting chapters. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
6/27/21, 11:32 PM
Great one!
Anonymous
6/27/21, 10:57 PM
Agreed with hypnothrill. I would have personally enjoyed hearing more stories of the burly security guard ;-)
Subtop
7/7/18, 4:23 AM
Perfect - us gurls need so much instruction to change from leather tops into obidient coco du king BOIs...

6/27/21, 10:46 PM
Oh yes - let the Top go and allow us to become the perfect gurls we need to be @Subtop
6/27/21, 10:37 PM
I'm really enjoying how this story is developing and am looking forward to seeing what happens with Jose and the cowboy from the neighboring ranch.