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6/14/21, 4:24 PM
AMAZING STORY! Very well written! I'd like to see the story from the other side... maybe find out that Randall is also emitting a musk that makes Dylan more aggressively alpha. Interesting to see what would happen the longer they spend around each other. Would you be up to writing the other side?

6/14/21, 4:49 PM
Thank you, @QuinnDnvr! That _is_ actually the case. The mating bond between Alphas and omegas in the _Hierarch Industries_ setting is reciprocal. The Alpha's pheromones change the omega to better suit his Alpha's ideal omega and at the same time, the omega emits pheromones of his own that change his Alpha to better suit his ideal Alpha. I'm open to writing more about Randall and Dylan in the future but for now, my focus is firmly on other writing projects. I may come back around to them at some point, but I have no compelling reason to do so right now, unfortunately.

6/28/21, 7:28 AM
it would be great to see a bit more of them. i was expecting Dylan to start calling Randall "honey" at some point because of his comment earlier--thought it was a chekhov's gun scenario and would be cute. great story though, love your work! @Ethan White
6/26/21, 5:37 AM
this is great hoping you can continue it and make it more perverse in the follow ups.

6/26/21, 5:43 AM
@Hypnobot - it has its turns... the next one is more into romance... but after that things will change...

Anonymous
6/28/21, 6:19 AM
@Math_Reez 💙 Puedes escribir la nueva historia sobre el padre y sus hijos?
6/28/21, 1:21 AM
3!!!!
Anonymous
6/27/21, 11:26 PM
This is interesting. I don't think I've read a werebear story in a fantasy setting. I'm curious to see where this goes. It's a good start and I like the iconic master-pupil dynamic, very much a part of the classic hero's journey. I wonder if the master is a werebear and he's just not letting on to his student? Hope to see more from you soon.

MuscleCub
6/27/21, 11:35 PM
Thanks! like darkblade its a situation where I'd spoil it if I said anything one way or another. You'll just have to wait for future chapters. Thanks for your interest! I've been wanting to write a fantasy story for quite a while now, and things just seemed to click when I put this to paper. Enjoy!
6/27/21, 10:40 PM
Excellent beginning --- both in world-building and writing. I look forward to where you'll take the story next.

MuscleCub
6/27/21, 11:33 PM
@Hypnoguy67 Thank you! The story is complete so its just a matter of posting chapters. I hope you continue to enjoy it.
6/27/21, 11:32 PM
Great one!
Anonymous
6/27/21, 10:57 PM
Agreed with hypnothrill. I would have personally enjoyed hearing more stories of the burly security guard ;-)
Subtop
7/7/18, 4:23 AM
Perfect - us gurls need so much instruction to change from leather tops into obidient coco du king BOIs...

6/27/21, 10:46 PM
Oh yes - let the Top go and allow us to become the perfect gurls we need to be @Subtop
6/27/21, 10:37 PM
I'm really enjoying how this story is developing and am looking forward to seeing what happens with Jose and the cowboy from the neighboring ranch.
6/27/21, 9:53 PM
I wonder what is going to happen, will we see a mass transformation?