Recent Comments

Obligatonym
6/27/21, 5:04 PM
really looking forward to the next chapter
Anonymous
5/9/21, 1:48 AM
Could you write the story about the younger brother taking the revenge on his father and older brother by make them younger and incest.

5/9/21, 2:36 AM
@ i think i know what your asking here. That may happen in a story soon.

Anonymous
6/27/21, 3:54 AM
@Drake Nightstorm We're waiting and always support your writing.

6/27/21, 4:23 PM
@ I apperciate the support.
6/27/21, 8:13 AM
Esta buena pero los dialogos no se notan, pero lo demas esta bien
Anonymous
6/27/21, 7:43 AM
Seria cool si humilla a José como humillo a la mujer.
Anonymous
6/27/21, 6:20 AM
wanted to be the most laxeed man on earth
Anonymous
6/27/21, 1:41 AM
muy bueno
6/27/21, 1:34 AM
Bravo, Bravo. QUITE a delicious tale. I really like your story. It was quite the game in a perspective, In victory and loss.
6/27/21, 1:30 AM
This was a great start. I also liked how Mike did it to get one over Will rather than for some sexual purpose - which allows the 'brother' to be the one to make it all the more fun. Honestly, taking advantage of something someone else did is a really fun element and so thumbs up on that. I look forward to seeing where and how this progresses and the nature of the changes that Danny puts into Will. Also I am really glad that the pov is the controller and I hope that Danny is a top rather than a bottom (and maybe he can rim Will as well, hehe). Also the potential for Mike to be hypnotized somehow as well could be fun. But yeah good story, thanks for posting it.
6/27/21, 12:50 AM
let see things will turn out on next part
6/26/21, 8:14 PM
There really is something delightful about stories with Bad Endings. Quite the fun read!