Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/27/21, 10:57 PM
Agreed with hypnothrill. I would have personally enjoyed hearing more stories of the burly security guard ;-)
Subtop
7/7/18, 4:23 AM
Perfect - us gurls need so much instruction to change from leather tops into obidient coco du king BOIs...

6/27/21, 10:46 PM
Oh yes - let the Top go and allow us to become the perfect gurls we need to be @Subtop
6/27/21, 10:37 PM
I'm really enjoying how this story is developing and am looking forward to seeing what happens with Jose and the cowboy from the neighboring ranch.
6/27/21, 9:53 PM
I wonder what is going to happen, will we see a mass transformation?
6/27/21, 9:41 PM
Enjoying the slow burn and excited for the intensity of the change to ramp up
Jun 21, 2007
rwriter51
6/27/21, 7:29 PM
Don't ask me why, but I always love these brotherly incest stories, and yours is well-written. Great work!
6/27/21, 4:21 PM
Really enjoying the beginning of the story. Already read it in Spanish, so I know where the first part is going, but I will be reading it again on GSS because I really like this story.

6/27/21, 7:24 PM
@BobbyBlobfish - glad you like it, and thanks again with all your help with the translation :3 πŸ’™πŸ’™πŸ’™
Obligatonym
6/27/21, 5:04 PM
really looking forward to the next chapter
Anonymous
5/9/21, 1:48 AM
Could you write the story about the younger brother taking the revenge on his father and older brother by make them younger and incest.

5/9/21, 2:36 AM
@ i think i know what your asking here. That may happen in a story soon.

Anonymous
6/27/21, 3:54 AM
@Drake Nightstorm We're waiting and always support your writing.

6/27/21, 4:23 PM
@ I apperciate the support.
6/27/21, 8:13 AM
Esta buena pero los dialogos no se notan, pero lo demas esta bien