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6/27/21, 1:30 AM
This was a great start. I also liked how Mike did it to get one over Will rather than for some sexual purpose - which allows the 'brother' to be the one to make it all the more fun. Honestly, taking advantage of something someone else did is a really fun element and so thumbs up on that. I look forward to seeing where and how this progresses and the nature of the changes that Danny puts into Will. Also I am really glad that the pov is the controller and I hope that Danny is a top rather than a bottom (and maybe he can rim Will as well, hehe). Also the potential for Mike to be hypnotized somehow as well could be fun. But yeah good story, thanks for posting it.
6/27/21, 12:50 AM
let see things will turn out on next part
6/26/21, 8:14 PM
There really is something delightful about stories with Bad Endings. Quite the fun read!
Oct 1, 2008
DNA
6/26/21, 12:49 PM
Nasty white boi! LOL! It woulda been better with less reminiscing about that boi's pussy conquests and more focus on his reprogramming into a Slut Whore Submissive Bottom Bitched White Jock Stud. I spooooooo enjoyed how towards the end our bitched boi loved that Asian cock up his ass. Talk about conversion completed and very, very successfully, too! A bitched jock white boi bottom like that? He's gonna sell for lots and lots of £€$, that's for certain.
6/26/21, 9:56 AM
Can't wait to see more. Would love if we can get a comeuppance on Mike and really make him pay.
6/26/21, 8:26 AM
that was a nice start. great work
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6/26/21, 7:36 AM
Oh, fuccccccck. Read your recent story and it was great, as it typical for you. Amazing imagery and slow burn and escalating hotness. Check your other stories afterwards. Saw this one again and couldn't hold back. Amazing wank. Just fucking *fantastic*. My thanks.
6/26/21, 7:16 AM
hotttt.
6/26/21, 3:20 AM
Really interesting premise. The stuff with the Priapists provides a new twist on the familiar world-change story. I just wish there was some more overt mind control in this first section. Charlie isn't really having conversations with the men around him, except for with the Priapist who is self-aware of what's happening. It would be really hot if he had some conversations with guys like Donovan or the security guard, which would show how their thinking is changing (and growing more sexualized) in the wake of this world change.
rwriter51
6/26/21, 3:13 AM
This story's ace, man. Just finished this 1st chapter and moving right on to the next. Jax is an idiot. It will be nice to see him get his comeuppance.