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6/26/21, 8:14 PM
There really is something delightful about stories with Bad Endings. Quite the fun read!
Oct 1, 2008
DNA
6/26/21, 12:49 PM
Nasty white boi! LOL! It woulda been better with less reminiscing about that boi's pussy conquests and more focus on his reprogramming into a Slut Whore Submissive Bottom Bitched White Jock Stud. I spooooooo enjoyed how towards the end our bitched boi loved that Asian cock up his ass. Talk about conversion completed and very, very successfully, too! A bitched jock white boi bottom like that? He's gonna sell for lots and lots of £€$, that's for certain.
6/26/21, 9:56 AM
Can't wait to see more. Would love if we can get a comeuppance on Mike and really make him pay.
6/26/21, 8:26 AM
that was a nice start. great work
AAA
6/26/21, 7:36 AM
Oh, fuccccccck. Read your recent story and it was great, as it typical for you. Amazing imagery and slow burn and escalating hotness. Check your other stories afterwards. Saw this one again and couldn't hold back. Amazing wank. Just fucking *fantastic*. My thanks.
6/26/21, 7:16 AM
hotttt.
6/26/21, 3:20 AM
Really interesting premise. The stuff with the Priapists provides a new twist on the familiar world-change story. I just wish there was some more overt mind control in this first section. Charlie isn't really having conversations with the men around him, except for with the Priapist who is self-aware of what's happening. It would be really hot if he had some conversations with guys like Donovan or the security guard, which would show how their thinking is changing (and growing more sexualized) in the wake of this world change.
rwriter51
6/26/21, 3:13 AM
This story's ace, man. Just finished this 1st chapter and moving right on to the next. Jax is an idiot. It will be nice to see him get his comeuppance.
6/26/21, 3:11 AM
A very intriguing start! I'll be looking forward to more! I'm fascinated by the Priapists and their role in all this!
6/25/21, 6:50 PM
A very interesting, dream-like quality in your writing style, but like a dream this left me very unclear about details and my inability to find focus clearly on the smoke-like images you generated left me sadly flaccid. Not saying it's not well-written, it is. It has a Lovecraftian feel to it that I really enjoyed and it invites expansion to explore more of the world you create.

6/25/21, 6:59 PM
@scudder Thank you for the feedback! It is so helpful to know what's working well stylistically and what could be improved!

6/26/21, 2:18 AM
After I wrote my message, I've been trying to remember if I've ever read anything that evokes the fluid-pumping, intense focus of a wet dream while still maintaining that gossamer-like, languid quality of dream imagery which you did very well.

6/26/21, 2:51 AM
@scudder That's such a compliment -- thank you! If something does come to mind, please feel free to share!