Recent Comments

Island Jock
6/21/21, 5:15 AM
OMG, your writing is epic! The long, drawn out, storyline creates such a good burn. Please keep it up!
6/21/21, 4:49 AM
Nice, want to see more! Whose next? Maybe a hot rower?
toy #4
6/21/21, 4:39 AM
Excellent work. Is the next chapter still being "packaged"?
6/21/21, 3:43 AM
So hot. Please make more stories like that and get kinkier. ;)
CMC
6/21/21, 1:16 AM
Extremely hot! Love how you showed some of their lives after becoming drones.
6/20/21, 10:23 PM
waiting for the next chapter :)
6/20/21, 10:21 PM
this was awesome
6/20/21, 8:38 PM
congratulations brian!! always the best stories. Dont stop!!
6/18/21, 2:58 AM
I gotta disagree with @fattenupmen (not to yuck his yum though, bc everyone is into different stuff and that's fantastic!) this story doesn't need weight gain or mpreg. Selfishly I'm not into either of those things, but more than that I think the existing chapters don't set up a foundation for it. It's hypno and brainwashing over the course of only a few days and I think introducing those elements in chapter 12 of a series would feel like it came out of nowhere.

6/20/21, 7:38 PM
@Curiosity don't worry, buddy, my main concern now is to keep the story consistent. I appreciate every comment and suggestion, but sometimes they don't fit so well on the story for the previous established plot, and in those cases I prefer to save them for another future story, if those ideas connect with me.
Anonymous
6/18/21, 10:23 PM
i say go for 3! This is a great story and you'll do fine!

6/20/21, 7:22 PM
Thank you so much for the positive words, Anonymous Reader! The next chapter is on the way, and growing healthy!